Electrical Appliance Ownership and Housework Time

The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Cambridge IELTS 16 Academic Test 1 Writing Task 1 visual

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The first line chart illustrates the proportions of households owning washing machines, refrigerators and vacuum cleaners while the second one depicts how much time per week on household chores from 1920 to 2019 in one particular nation.

Overall, it is notable that while the figures for witnessed a strong surge, the opposite was true for . In addition, refrigerators and vacuums gained substantial popularity, making them the most common at the end of the period.

Upon a closer look at appliance ownership, in 1920, the percentages of homes having refrigerators and vacuums were nearly 3% and 30%, respectively. During the next ten decades, the former skyrocketed to its peak of 100% in 1980, followed by a plateau, whereas the latter soared to 100% in 2000, then remained unchanged. As for washing machines, ownership was much higher than the others initially, at 40%. However, it experienced a slower growth to just 70% between 1920 and 1960, but later in 1980 and recovered steadily to approximately 75% by 2019.

Turning to the figures for hours spent on housework weekly, a plunge from 50 to 15 was seen over the first 60 years, and it then marginally declined to 10 hours by 2019.

Overall assessment

Why this response received Band 8.0

This is a well-organised report that identifies the relationship between the two charts and supports its overview with accurate, well-selected figures. The account of washing-machine ownership is particularly effective because it captures both the temporary fall and subsequent recovery. Flexible sentence construction makes the comparisons easy to follow. The main limitation is occasional imprecision in vocabulary, especially when referring to the appliances and the time spent on housework.

IELTS criteria

How each score was decided

Task Achievement

8.0

The overview clearly contrasts rising appliance ownership with falling housework time, and the supporting figures accurately cover the main trends, including the washing-machine dip and eventual universal ownership of the other appliances.

Coherence and Cohesion

8.0

The report progresses logically from an overview to appliance ownership and then housework time, with clear comparisons and effective referencing through phrases such as “the former” and “the latter.”

Lexical Resource

7.0

There is a varied vocabulary for trends, including “plateau,” “dipped” and “recovered steadily,” but “utensils” is an imprecise name for electrical appliances and “the time quantity” is an unnatural expression.

Grammatical Range and Accuracy

8.0

Complex sentences, relative structures and contrasting clauses are generally well controlled, with clear punctuation throughout; the article in “a slower growth” is a minor lapse.