Electrical Appliance Ownership and Housework Time

The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Cambridge IELTS 16 Academic Test 1 Writing Task 1 visual

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The line graphs the ownership of common household electrical devices and the done by families in a country between 1920 and 2019.

Overall, the possession of electrical items by families in this country significantly increased during the period, and as a result, the duration of their weekly housework requirement declined proportionately.

According to the first graph, refrigerators were a , but their presence soared afterwards. Since 1980, every family in this country . A similar, but much smoother trend can be observed with vacuum cleaners, which were present a century ago but are now by 100% of all homes. Lastly, washing machines were owned by 40% of families in 1920 and reached 70% in just four decades. just below 80%.

The second line chart indicates a direct correlation between the acquisition of essential household appliances and the duration of work required to be done at home. Household work duration dropped dramatically from a per week in 1920 to a mere .

Overall assessment

Why this response received Band 7.0

The response gives a clear overview and covers all appliances and the housework trend with mostly accurate data and effective comparisons. The main limitation is slight imprecision in a few figures, such as the washing machine's final percentage, along with some formulaic linking phrases.

IELTS criteria

How each score was decided

Task Achievement

7.0

The response covers all three appliances and the housework chart with a clear overview of the inverse relationship, though minor inaccuracies such as describing the washing machine figure as just below 80% instead of 75% reduce precision.

Coherence and Cohesion

7.0

Ideas progress logically from overview to appliance details and then the hours chart, with cohesive devices like 'Overall' and 'According to' used naturally, though some connectors are slightly mechanical.

Lexical Resource

7.0

Vocabulary is flexible and mostly precise, including 'soared', 'a rare commodity', and 'declined proportionately', with only occasional awkward collocations such as 'duration of their weekly housework requirement'.

Grammatical Range and Accuracy

7.0

A wide range of structures is used accurately, including complex sentences with relative clauses and time references, with only rare minor errors that do not impede meaning.