The response covers both graphs and provides a relevant overview. Most public-transport details are accurate, but Melbourne’s stated range misses its 2006 peak. In the private-transport paragraph, Sydney and Melbourne are reversed, and the Perth and Canberra series are also misidentified.
5.0The response is logically organised with a clear overview, well-managed paragraphs, and a good range of cohesive devices used naturally.
7.0Vocabulary is flexible for describing trends and comparisons, with phrases such as 'posting the highest figures', 'hovering between', and 'increased markedly' used effectively.
7.0GRAGrammatical Range and Accuracy
A range of structures, including complex sentences, participial phrases and clauses introduced by while and although, is used with accuracy and control.
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