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Changes at an Australian Zoo Between 1960 and Now

The maps show the changes that have taken place at an Australian Zoo between 1960 and now.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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Key features: Changes at an Australian Zoo Between 1960 and Now

WhyThis is aMap — it asks you to describe how a place changed.

SoWe split the points intoOverview(the overall change to the place)andKey changes(what was added, removed, moved or kept).

Overview

2 points

Key changes

12 points

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Response 01
Estimated band7.5/ 9

Overall assessment

The response identifies the main access and transport additions and describes the rearrangement of animal displays in a clear chronological structure. The original seal show is reasonably described as north-eastern, and the essay does not call the picnic area new. More useful improvements are to state that the Australian animals enclosure remains, qualify the claimed gift-shop expansion, and repair the incomplete comparison structure in the introduction.

TA

Task Achievement

The response gives a clear overview of new access and transport facilities and reports most animal-display changes accurately. It does not explicitly compare the retained Australian animals enclosure, and the claim that the gift shop has been significantly expanded is stronger than the diagram alone establishes. The original seal show is reasonably located in the north-east; the picnic area is not described as new.

7.0
CC

Coherence and Cohesion

Ideas are organised logically from overview to 1960 layout to present-day changes, with a range of cohesive devices used naturally, though a few referential expressions are slightly loose.

7.0
LR

Lexical Resource

Vocabulary is flexible and precise, with natural terms like 'designated for', 'diversified', and 'substantial modernization' conveying spatial change accurately, with only rare lapses in precision.

8.0
GRA

Grammatical Range and Accuracy

A wide range of complex structures, including participial and relative clauses, is used with generally good control, though occasional errors such as 'its layout in 1960 with its current configuration' slightly reduce accuracy.

7.0

What to work on next

Verify every location and retained feature against the maps before writing, ensuring nothing that persists between the two dates is omitted or mislocated.

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