The response gives a clear overview of new access and transport facilities and reports most animal-display changes accurately. It does not explicitly compare the retained Australian animals enclosure, and the claim that the gift shop has been significantly expanded is stronger than the diagram alone establishes. The original seal show is reasonably located in the north-east; the picnic area is not described as new.
7.0Ideas are organised logically from overview to 1960 layout to present-day changes, with a range of cohesive devices used naturally, though a few referential expressions are slightly loose.
7.0Vocabulary is flexible and precise, with natural terms like 'designated for', 'diversified', and 'substantial modernization' conveying spatial change accurately, with only rare lapses in precision.
8.0GRAGrammatical Range and Accuracy
A wide range of complex structures, including participial and relative clauses, is used with generally good control, though occasional errors such as 'its layout in 1960 with its current configuration' slightly reduce accuracy.
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