Plastic Bottle Recycling Process Diagram

The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Cambridge IELTS 16 Academic Test 4 Writing Task 1 visual

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The process diagram the nine-stage process involved in recycling plastic bottles - beginning with consumers discarding them and culminating in the production of new consumer plastic products.

Overall, plastic bottle recycling is a circular system where used bottles are transformed into raw materials for a variety of new items, which can then be recycled again.

consumers depositing used plastic bottles into designated recycling bins. These bottles are subsequently collected and transported to . Upon arrival, the bottles undergo a in which workers manually separate recyclable plastics from other waste. Following this, the sorted bottles are compressed into large, compact blocks, which are then fed . This mechanical breakdown yields small plastic fragments.

These fragments are thoroughly washed to ensure purity before being introduced into a machine that produces plastic pellets. In the next stage, these pellets are subjected to heat, forming the raw material essential for manufacturing a diverse range of plastic-based goods. Finally, these refined raw materials are rolled out to produce various end products, such as t-shirts, , and new plastic bottles or containers, thus completing the cycle as these products will eventually be recycled once again.

Overall assessment

Why this response received Band 8.0

The response demonstrates excellent command of the task, accurately covering all nine stages of the recycling process in a logical sequence with a clear overview of the circular nature of the system. Its strongest aspect is the precise, varied language used to describe each stage; the main limitation is only that the overview could more explicitly signal the cyclical return to stage one.

IELTS criteria

How each score was decided

Task Achievement

8.0

All nine stages from the diagram are accurately selected and reported in the correct order, with a clear overview of the circular system and accurate end products such as t-shirts and pens, with no invented details.

Coherence and Cohesion

8.0

Information progresses logically through the process using a cohesive range of sequencing devices such as subsequently, upon arrival, and following this, with clear paragraphing and only minor mechanical cohesion.

Lexical Resource

8.0

The response uses a wide and precise vocabulary appropriate to the process, including items like sorting phase, compressed, crushing machines, plastic pellets, and refined raw materials, with natural collocation and no visible errors.

Grammatical Range and Accuracy

8.0

A wide range of structures is used with flexibility and accuracy, including passive constructions, relative clauses, and participle phrases, with errors so rare they barely exist.