Older People Not Exercising Regularly

Both questions are addressed through relevant causes and family-based solutions, but development is uneven: the childcare example needs a clearer link to missed exercise, and the reward proposal needs explanation.

The essay is coherently organised with a clear introduction, body paragraphs, and conclusion, though linking is occasionally mechanical and transitions within paragraphs are not always smooth.

Vocabulary is adequate for the task, with relevant expressions such as 'medical practitioners' and 'hindrances', but constructions such as 'is in their busy schedule' and 'find an amount of time to share' are awkward or imprecise.

There is a mix of simple and complex sentence forms, but agreement, coordination and capitalisation errors occur, including 'older people ... plays', the clause linked only by 'hence', and 'First of all, With'. Meaning remains generally clear.

The response addresses both questions and reaches a relevant conclusion, but the causes of non-compliance are limited to one weakly developed idea and the introduction promises a discussion of 'problems' rather than answering the prompt directly.

Paragraphing is logical and progression is broadly clear, though linking is at times mechanical or inaccurate, such as the combined 'Since... hence' construction.

Vocabulary is adequate for the topic with some appropriate items like 'stamina' and 'immunity', but there is repetition and awkward usage such as 'glued to their exercise routine' and 'habitual to this routine'.

A mix of simple and complex structures is attempted, but errors recur in verb patterns, repeated nouns and sentence construction, including 'involve in', 'all age groups people' and 'keeping it continue'. Meaning remains mostly recoverable.

The response fully addresses both parts of the task, presents a clear position, and develops main ideas with relevant explanation and a supporting example.

Ideas progress logically across well-managed paragraphs with a range of cohesive devices, though a few connections are slightly mechanical.

Vocabulary is sufficiently flexible and precise, with good collocation such as 'heeded', 'debilitating conditions', and 'financial impediments', despite occasional minor slips.

A variety of complex structures is used with generally good control, while a small number of errors, such as 'a regular exercise regular routine' and 'the this', occasionally reduce precision.

Both questions are fully addressed with a clear position, relevantly developed reasons and solutions, and a specific supporting example such as the East Asian tai chi reference.

Ideas progress logically through clearly organised reasons and solutions. However, “This can be encouraged” leaves the precise activity or participation being encouraged implicit, and a more specific introductory roadmap would clarify the argument.

Vocabulary is flexible and precise, with natural collocations such as 'sedentary activities', 'beset by physical pain', and 'low-impact exercise', showing good awareness of style.

A wide range of structures is used accurately, including complex sentences with relative and participial clauses, with only rare minor lapses that do not impede communication.