Having First Child at an Older Age

In some countries today, many people decide to have their first child when they are older. What are the reasons? Do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

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Essay · 346 words · 4 paragraphs · 12 comments

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Response 01
Estimated band7.5/ 9

Overall assessment

The response fully addresses both parts of the question with a clear, consistently maintained position and relevant supporting explanations. Its strongest aspect is the precise, natural vocabulary, while the main limitation is that ideas are developed through generalised reasoning rather than concrete examples, which leaves the argument somewhat formulaic.

TR

Task Response

Both questions are fully addressed with a clear position, well-developed main ideas, and relevant extension, though support remains general rather than example-based.

7.0
CC

Coherence and Cohesion

Ideas progress logically across well-structured paragraphs with a clear conclusion, although cohesive devices are sometimes applied in a slightly mechanical, formulaic manner.

7.0
LR

Lexical Resource

Vocabulary is wide, precise, and idiomatic throughout, with only very rare minor slips and no significant inaccuracy impeding meaning.

8.0
GRA

Grammatical Range and Accuracy

A wide range of sentence structures is used with good flexibility and accuracy, with only occasional errors or minor punctuation lapses that do not reduce clarity.

7.0

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Strengthen the argument by grounding key claims in specific examples or real-world evidence rather than broad generalisations.

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