Buying Local Goods Instead of Imported Goods

Both questions are answered with a clear position on the positive trend and relevant supporting ideas, though development remains somewhat repetitive and general.

The response is coherently organised with clear paragraphing and linking devices, but cohesion is somewhat mechanical and connections are sometimes formulaic.

There is an adequate range of vocabulary for the topic, but some imprecise or erroneous expressions such as 'a ample of causes' and 'local humans' reduce precision.

A mix of simple and complex structures is used, but frequent errors in agreement, articles, and verb forms occasionally impede clarity without blocking the message.

The response addresses both questions with a clear positive position and relevant supporting ideas, but the reasons for the trend are underdeveloped and some claims, such as trust in national products, are loosely argued.

Ideas are organised into clear paragraphs with basic linking devices, though progression is sometimes mechanical and cohesion within sentences is occasionally weak.

The response shows an adequate range of topic-related vocabulary such as unemployment and cultural integration, but awkward expressions including “promotes value of products” and “keep themselves up with” reduce precision.

A mix of simple and complex sentence forms is used, but frequent errors in agreement, articles, and plurality occasionally reduce clarity.

The response addresses both questions, giving plausible reasons and a clear positive position with relevant examples, though development is somewhat repetitive and occasionally uneven in supporting detail.

Paragraphing is logical and cohesive devices such as 'to begin with', 'moreover', and 'as a result' are used, but progression within paragraphs is sometimes mechanical and ideas are repeated across sections.

Vocabulary is generally adequate for the topic, with phrases like 'perishable goods' and 'create more demand', but word choice shows awkwardness and inaccuracy, such as 'an increment', 'several taxations' and 'on a high scale profits'.

A mix of structures including conditionals and 'not only...but also' is attempted, yet frequent errors in agreement, capitalization, articles, and verb forms, such as 'Buying local products also encourage', reduce overall accuracy.

The response addresses both questions directly, presents a clear negative position, and develops each reason with relevant explanation and examples, though some points remain generally rather than deeply extended.

Paragraphing is logical and progression is clear with effective linking devices, but the repetition of the introductory idea in the body paragraph creates noticeable redundancy.

Vocabulary is flexible and mostly precise, with apt collocations such as 'economies of scale' and 'trade disputes', though some phrases like 'fueled by the belief' and 'carbon footprint' are recycled.

A wide range of complex structures is used with generally good control, and errors are rare and non-impeding, such as the slightly awkward 'has been fueled due to'.

Both questions are addressed with a clear negative position and relevant explanations and examples, but the evaluation shifts from an increasing preference for local goods to buying only local products.

The response is logically organised with clear paragraphing and a range of cohesive devices such as moreover, therefore, and for instance, used mostly naturally throughout.

There is a sufficient range of topic-related vocabulary, but occasional imprecision and awkward collocations such as “severely make one’s choices” and “leave out many options” reduce precision.

A variety of complex structures, including conditionals, relative clauses, and subordinate constructions, is used with generally good control and only minor, non-impeding errors.

The response addresses both questions directly, presents a clear position, and develops the reasons and the evaluation with relevant explanation, though support remains somewhat general.

Ideas progress logically through clearly sequenced paragraphs with appropriate cohesive devices, although linking is sometimes simple and formulaic.

Vocabulary is adequate and generally accurate for the topic, but relies on common, everyday expressions with limited flexibility and precision.

A mix of sentence types is used with good accuracy, but structures are often simple and complex forms show limited range and variety.

The response answers both questions directly, maintains a clear positive position throughout, and develops main ideas with relevant examples, though development is sometimes general rather than extended.

Paragraphing is logical and progression is clear with appropriate cohesive devices, but the third paragraph largely repeats points already made, slightly reducing the efficiency of development.

Vocabulary is flexible and precise, with natural collocations such as 'stimulating economic growth' and 'lower carbon footprint', showing good awareness of style despite some repeated phrasing.

A wide range of complex structures is used with flexibility and accuracy, including relative clauses and participle constructions, with only rare, non-impeding errors.