The response covers all five countries, identifies Iceland as the highest throughout and supplies broadly supported figures. However, the overview incorrectly groups Turkey with the countries showing an overall rise. The final paragraph recognises its fall and recovery, while Chile’s final figure could make the comparison more explicit.
7.0Ideas progress logically from overview to detailed comparison, and cohesive devices such as 'compared to' and 'whereas' are used appropriately, though some referencing and sequencing feel slightly mechanical.
7.0The response uses a varied range of trend expressions, including “slight fall”, “rises” and “recovered”. Some wording could be more precise: “small rises” would avoid the possible implication of statistical significance, and “respectively” would map the two changes more clearly than “in turn”.
7.0GRAGrammatical Range and Accuracy
A range of structures is used, including complex comparisons and contrasting clauses with “while” and “whereas”. Errors such as “between 15 to 64” and the comma in “the rate of employment in Turkey, recovered” are minor and do not impede meaning.
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