The response covers all five foods, gives an accurate overview of their net changes and reports the selected figures correctly. The 171-word response meets the minimum length. Clearer comparison of the sizes of the increases and explicit dates for the meat figures would strengthen the account; not every intermediate value needs to be listed.
7.0Information is logically grouped by food type with clear progression and effective referencing, though transitions are somewhat mechanical in places.
7.0Vocabulary is varied and generally appropriate for consumption trends. However, “were consumed under 1000 grams” needs a natural quantity phrase, and expressions such as “were included on a weekly basis in a person’s diet” could be more direct.
7.0GRAGrammatical Range and Accuracy
A wide range of structures is used with strong control, including accurate participle and passive constructions, and errors are rare and non-impeding.
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