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Water Use in Six Countries in 2003

The table below describes water usage for 3 different purposes in 6 countries in 2003.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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Key features: Water Use in Six Countries in 2003

WhyThis is aTable — it asks you to group and compare the key figures.

SoWe split the points intoOverview(the main patterns in the table)andKey features(figures and comparisons worth reporting).

Overview

2 points

Key features

5 points

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Response 01
Estimated band7.5/ 9

Overall assessment

The response reports all six countries accurately and groups similar water-use profiles effectively. Agriculture dominates in four countries, while domestic use leads in Canada and Australia; making that contrast explicit would strengthen the overview. The writing uses varied structures and useful comparisons, although an incomplete sector phrase, article choices and the verb form “Japan use” reduce precision.

TA

Task Achievement

All six countries and all three purposes are covered with accurate figures and relevant comparisons. The overview identifies the dominant agricultural pattern, but explicitly contrasting Canada and Australia would improve selection; Japan could also be related to the other agriculture-led countries.

8.0
CC

Coherence and Cohesion

Paragraphs progress logically through countries with similar profiles. The Canada–Australia comparison is easy to follow, while the separate Japan paragraph would be more integrated if it explicitly compared Japan with the agricultural-use group.

7.0
LR

Lexical Resource

Terms such as “profiles” and “share” support clear comparisons. Greater precision would come from using “shares” rather than “ratios”, identifying percentages as proportions of total use, and choosing a neutral size description instead of “insignificant”.

7.0
GRA

Grammatical Range and Accuracy

The response uses varied complex sentences with generally strong control. Local slips include the incomplete phrase “in industrial”, the article in “The Canadian agriculture”, punctuation after “however”, and the past-tense form needed in “Japan use”.

8.0

What to work on next

State the domestic-use exceptions explicitly in the overview, connect Japan’s 66% agricultural share to the other agriculture-led countries, and proofread incomplete sector phrases and past-tense verbs.

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