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Urban Population Growth in World Regions

The chart below gives information about the growth of the urban population in certain parts of the world including the prediction of the future.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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Key features: Urban Population Growth in World Regions

WhyThis is aBar chart — it asks you to compare the most important categories.

SoWe split the points intoOverview(the biggest differences or patterns)andKey features(figures and comparisons worth reporting).

Overview

3 points

Key features

10 points

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Response 01
Estimated band8.0/ 9

Overall assessment

The response covers all groups and time points, with a clear overview, broadly defensible estimates and useful comparisons. Vocabulary and sentence structures are varied and well controlled. The main factual limitation is the claim that Asia’s urban share more than tripled by 2000. Separating the historical detail from the forecasts and quantifying the narrowing gaps would make the final paragraph clearer.

TA

Task Achievement

The response covers the global total and all three regions across 1950, 2000 and 2030, with a clear overview and broadly defensible estimates. However, the claim that both Africa and Asia more than tripled their urban shares by 2000 overstates Asia’s increase.

8.0
CC

Coherence and Cohesion

Ideas progress logically from the overview to detail organised by time point, with cohesive devices and referencing used naturally. The long final paragraph could separate the 2000 observations from the 2030 forecasts more clearly.

8.0
LR

Lexical Resource

Vocabulary is flexible and precise for describing trends and projections, including items such as urbanised, projections, climbed, and narrowed the gap, with only rare imprecision.

8.0
GRA

Grammatical Range and Accuracy

A wide range of structures, including complex comparative and passive forms, is used with strong control, and errors are rare and non-impeding.

8.0

What to work on next

Check multiplicative comparisons against the chart: Africa more than tripled its urban share by 2000, whereas Asia almost tripled. Then separate the forecasts from the 2000 figures and use percentage-point gaps to support the final comparison.

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