UK Daily Fruit and Vegetable Consumption 2001-2008

The response covers all three groups across the period, gives a clear overview of rising trends with women consistently highest, and data figures are broadly consistent with the chart, with only minor imprecision in describing the men's change.

Ideas are logically organised with clear paragraphing, an overview, and cohesive devices such as 'Similarly' and 'On the other hand', though a few linkages are mechanical or informal.

Vocabulary is generally flexible and appropriate for describing trends, including 'proportion', 'dietary guideline', and 'gradual increase', but phrases like 'Anyways' and 'lesser change in the amount' reduce precision.

A range of structures is attempted, but errors including the missing verb in 'women who the mentioned proportions' and tense inconsistencies lower accuracy despite mostly clear meaning.

The response presents a clear overview, covers all three groups across the period, and reports most key stages and peaks accurately, though a few figures deviate from the chart, such as children at 20% in 2008 instead of roughly 24%.

Ideas progress logically from an overview to group-by-group detail with effective linking devices. However, the supplied response uses single line breaks rather than clear blank-line paragraph divisions, so its main stages could be visually separated more clearly.

Vocabulary is flexible and appropriate for describing trends, with good use of items like 'peaking', 'slight decline', and 'steadily', though some phrasing is only slightly repetitive.

A wide range of structures is used with strong accuracy, including complex sentences and participial phrases, with only rare, non-impeding slips.

The response presents a clear overview and covers all three groups with broadly supported approximate figures. The statement that all groups increased by the end is valid as a comparison with 2001. The introduction omits the UK, and the overview could better distinguish net growth from the later declines.

Ideas progress logically from overview to group-by-group detail with effective use of cohesive devices and referencing, showing consistent paragraphing and clear progression throughout.

Vocabulary is flexible and precise, with natural phrases such as 'a steady rise', 'a noticeable increase', and 'falling back slightly', showing good awareness of style and collocation with only minor repetition.

A wide range of complex structures, including relative clauses and varied tense use, is handled with accuracy and flexibility, with only occasional minor slips that do not impede meaning.

The response covers all three groups and provides an overview of the rise and later decline. It correctly identifies women as having the smallest net increase. However, it wrongly places men at about 12% in the early years; their level is about 17.5%.

Ideas progress logically from an overview to group-by-group detail, with cohesive devices such as 'Similarly' and 'On the other hand' used naturally, though the opening of paragraph three partially repeats the overview.

Vocabulary is sufficiently flexible for the task, with terms like 'notable increase', 'steadily peaked', and 'gradual decline', though some phrasing such as 'the mentioned diet' and 'this kind of food consumption' is imprecise.

A good range of structures is used with generally accurate control, including varied tense forms, participial phrases like 'before declining to 30%', and complex sentences, with only minor awkwardness such as 'rose from 12% ... and reached up to 27%'.

The response covers the main trends, provides a clear overview, and makes sustained comparisons across the three groups, but some reported data is inaccurate, such as the children's peak of 27% in 2005, which the chart places around 2007.

Information is organised logically with clear progression from overview to detail, and cohesive devices such as 'Subsequently' and 'A relatively similar pattern' are used naturally.

The response uses a good range of less common vocabulary such as 'adhered to', 'surpassing', and 'ascending trend' with generally appropriate usage, though a few phrases are slightly awkward.

A wide range of structures, including participial clauses and varied subordination, is used with flexibility and consistent accuracy throughout the response.