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Renewable Energy Proportion in Four Countries

The chart shows the proportion of renewable energy in total energy supply in 4 countries from 1997 to 2010.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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Key features: Renewable Energy Proportion in Four Countries

WhyThis is aBar chart — it asks you to compare the most important categories.

SoWe split the points intoOverview(the biggest differences or patterns)andKey features(figures and comparisons worth reporting).

Overview

2 points

Key features

5 points

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Response 01
Estimated band7.0/ 9

Overall assessment

The response is well organised and covers all four countries, with an overview identifying the rises in Sweden and Iceland and Iceland’s leading position. Most estimates are reasonable. However, Turkey’s intermediate peak is omitted, Sweden’s later figures are not supplied, and Iceland’s final share is reported as above 70% although its bar reaches that gridline. The wording also sometimes confuses energy supply with production or use. Complex sentences show generally good control, with some local grammatical and lexical slips.

TA

Task Achievement

The response covers all four countries and identifies important features in its overview. Most estimates are reasonable, but Turkey’s 2000 peak and Sweden’s later figures are omitted. Iceland’s final share is described as above 70% although the bar reaches that gridline, and references to production or use sometimes misidentify the chart’s measure of supply.

7.0
CC

Coherence and Cohesion

Ideas are logically sequenced from overview to country-by-country detail with effective use of referencing and cohesive devices such as 'meanwhile', 'similarly', and 'regarding'.

7.0
LR

Lexical Resource

Vocabulary is varied, with expressions such as “witnessed an upward trend” and “came from renewable resources”. Precision is weaker in “most popular” and “natural resources”, which do not accurately name the chart’s comparison or energy category, and some prepositional expressions need attention.

7.0
GRA

Grammatical Range and Accuracy

Complex sentences and relative clauses show generally good control. Local errors include the semicolon introducing the list of years, “who” referring to Sweden as a country, and the missing article in “in regards to proportion”. These slips do not prevent understanding.

7.0

What to work on next

Describe each country's trend across all three years more precisely, noting intermediate movements such as Turkey's peak in 2000 rather than presenting a simple decline.

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