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Money Given to Developing Countries by Five Organisations

The chart below shows the amount of money given to developing countries from five organisations from 2008 to 2011.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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Key features: Money Given to Developing Countries by Five Organisations

WhyThis is aBar chart — it asks you to compare the most important categories.

SoWe split the points intoOverview(the biggest differences or patterns)andKey features(figures and comparisons worth reporting).

Overview

3 points

Key features

7 points

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Answer · 169 words · 4 paragraphs · 11 comments

Score details

Response 01
Estimated band7.0/ 9

Overall assessment

The response covers all five organisations with an accurate, well-organised comparison and a clear overview of the contrasting trends. Its strongest aspect is the precise use of data and trend language, while the main limitation is some awkward phrasing and a tendency to reuse formulaic verb choices such as 'witnessed'.

TA

Task Achievement

The response covers all five organisations and gives a clear overview of the change in the leading donor. The reported amounts are defensible approximations, but the final paragraph compresses the fluctuations of organisations 1 and 3 and omits the intermediate figures that explain organisation 2’s rise.

7.0
CC

Coherence and Cohesion

Information is logically sequenced from overview to detail, with cohesive devices such as 'Overall', 'Thereafter' and 'In contrast' used naturally, though a few linkages are slightly mechanical.

7.0
LR

Lexical Resource

There is a good range of language for trends and comparisons, but repeated uses of witnessed and phrases such as registered a sharp growth are cumbersome. Investment is less accurate than donation for money given to developing countries, and unprecedented would benefit from an explicit time limit.

7.0
GRA

Grammatical Range and Accuracy

Complex structures, including passive constructions, while clauses and participial phrases, are generally controlled. However, singular organisation is repeatedly used for two numbered organisations, and fourth and fifth place should use the plural places.

7.0

What to work on next

Vary sentence structures and replace repeated formulaic verbs like 'witnessed' with more natural descriptions to raise the overall polish of the report.

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