All nine destinations and their printed arrival totals and percentage changes are reported faithfully. The overview identifies the largest and smallest destinations, France's stability and Hong Kong's decline; highlighting Germany's leading percentage growth and changes in relative position would strengthen selection.
8.0Progression is logical from overview to 2009 figures to changes, with effective use of linking devices such as 'By contrast', 'while', and 'whereas'; the final paragraph is occasionally list-like in sequencing data.
8.0Vocabulary is flexible and precise, using accurate terms such as 'recorded a decline', 'marginal growth', 'substantial growth', and 'more than doubling', with only minimal repetition of phrases like 'million arrivals'.
8.0GRAGrammatical Range and Accuracy
A wide range of structures is used with strong control, including participial constructions such as 'climbing from' and 'followed by', and subordinate clauses introduced by 'while' and 'whereas'. There are no clear grammatical errors in the response.
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