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International Visitor Arrivals in 2009 and 2010

The table shows the number of international visitor arrivals in nine countries and the percentage changes between 2009 and 2010.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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Key features: International Visitor Arrivals in 2009 and 2010

WhyThis is aTable — it asks you to group and compare the key figures.

SoWe split the points intoOverview(the main patterns in the table)andKey features(figures and comparisons worth reporting).

Overview

3 points

Key features

10 points

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Response 01

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Answer · 181 words · 4 paragraphs · 8 comments

Score details

Response 01
Estimated band8.0/ 9

Overall assessment

The response is well organised and fluent, and reports the included destinations' printed figures clearly. Its main content weaknesses are the omission of Hong Kong's sole decline and the overview's incorrect inclusion of unchanged France among destinations with increases. The established/emerging market labels are also unsupported. The introduction's count of nine matches the table's nine rows, despite the inconsistent image heading.

TA

Task Achievement

The response reports the included destinations' printed figures faithfully, but omits Hong Kong and its sole decline. The overview incorrectly groups unchanged France among destinations with modest increases and adds market classifications not supplied by the table. The introduction correctly counts nine data rows despite the image heading's reference to eight countries.

7.0
CC

Coherence and Cohesion

Ideas progress logically from overview to detailed data, with well-managed sequencing and cohesive devices such as 'Overall', 'In contrast', and 'At the lower end of the spectrum'.

8.0
LR

Lexical Resource

Vocabulary is varied and generally fluent, including 'trailed by', 'uptick' and 'surge'. However, 'established markets' and 'emerging destinations' impose classifications not supported by the table, and consistent use of 'arrivals' would preserve the statistical unit more precisely.

8.0
GRA

Grammatical Range and Accuracy

A wide range of complex structures, including participial phrases and balanced contrasts, is used with consistent accuracy and punctuation control.

8.0

What to work on next

Add Hong Kong's sole decline to the overview and detail, remove France from the group showing increases, and compare destinations using observed changes rather than unsupported market labels.

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