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Monthly Cinema Attendance by Age Group (1984–2003)

The graph shows the percentage of visiting the cinema once a month or more between 1984 to 2003 (4 age groups).

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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Key features: Monthly Cinema Attendance by Age Group (1984–2003)

WhyThis is aLine graph — it asks you to report the main trends and changes over time.

SoWe split the points intoOverview(the main trends over the period)andKey features(figures and comparisons worth reporting).

Overview

2 points

Key features

5 points

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Answer · 183 words · 4 paragraphs · 15 comments

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Response 01
Estimated band7.0/ 9

Overall assessment

The response is well organised, covers all four age groups and gives a clear overview of their overall increases. The 15–24 group remains highest throughout, although this should be expressed as a proportion rather than a number of people. The estimate of approximately 35% in 1992 is defensible. More evidence of intermediate turning points, clearer ratio language and careful handling of the mismatch between the prompt’s dates and the plotted endpoint would improve the report.

TA

Task Achievement

The response covers all four age groups and identifies the overall increases and the leading group. Its approximately 35% estimate for 1992 is defensible. However, it compares numbers of people rather than proportions, gives limited evidence for intermediate fluctuations, and does not resolve the mismatch between the prompt’s date range and the later plotted endpoint.

6.0
CC

Coherence and Cohesion

Ideas are arranged logically with clear paragraphing, a coherent overview, and effective use of linking devices such as meanwhile, turning to, and in comparison.

7.0
LR

Lexical Resource

The response uses a varied range of trend language, including erratic pattern and fluctuating wildly. Some expressions lack precision: more people substitutes counts for proportions, twice higher than is ambiguous, and stopped at is less suitable than ended at for describing the chart’s endpoint.

7.0
GRA

Grammatical Range and Accuracy

A good range of structures is used, including participle and relative clauses, with generally reliable accuracy. Errors include the missing of in 10% people, malformed age-range compounds and a consistent growth. The present tense in the age-label clause is understandable, though past tense would align more smoothly with the historical account.

7.0

What to work on next

Compare age-group proportions rather than population counts. Add a peak and subsequent trough to support the description of fluctuations, and distinguish the 2003 tick from the later plotted endpoint.

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