The response presents a clear overview of the upward trend and the highest and lowest countries, selects and reports most key figures accurately from both visuals, though one value is rounded away from the table's 8.8 million and the description of Europe, Britain and the USA is somewhat vague.
7.0Paragraphing is logical and progression through the line graph then the table is clear, supported by cohesive devices such as 'Overall', 'First' and 'On the other hand', though some phrases like 'in ascending other in' reduce clarity locally.
7.0Vocabulary is generally flexible and appropriate, including items like 'saw an upward trend' and 'hit a peak', with occasional imprecise choices such as 'originality' for 'origin' and 'the least no of visits'.
7.0GRAGrammatical Range and Accuracy
A range of sentence structures is used with mostly accurate control, but there are recurring minor grammatical and prepositional errors, including 'between 1985 to 1995' and inconsistent article use.
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