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Age of UK Visitors to Spain, 1983 and 2003

The charts below give information about the age of visitors from the UK to Spain in 1983 and in 2003.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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Key features: Age of UK Visitors to Spain, 1983 and 2003

WhyThis is aPie chart — it asks you to compare proportions and the biggest shares.

SoWe split the points intoOverview(the largest shares or the main change)andKey features(figures and comparisons worth reporting).

Overview

2 points

Key features

5 points

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Response 01
Estimated band8.0/ 9

Overall assessment

The response covers all age groups with accurate figures and relevant comparisons, and its overview identifies the largest group and the main directions of change. Vocabulary and sentence control are strong. The main limitation is the unsupported inference that rising shares indicate growing interest in Spain; explicitly identifying the change in second place would also sharpen the comparison.

TA

Task Achievement

The response provides a clear overview, accurate figures and relevant comparisons across both years. Combining the two youngest bands is defensible, but the claim of growing interest goes beyond the age-share data.

8.0
CC

Coherence and Cohesion

Ideas are logically sequenced with a clear overview, well-managed paragraphing, and cohesive devices such as 'This was followed by' and 'By 2003' that guide the reader effortlessly.

8.0
LR

Lexical Resource

Vocabulary is flexible and precise, using varied expressions like 'consistently predominant', 'exhibited a decline', and 'rose significantly' with natural, accurate collocation.

8.0
GRA

Grammatical Range and Accuracy

A wide range of structures is used with strong control, including accurate participial phrases, passive forms, and complex comparative constructions, with only rare minor slips.

8.0

What to work on next

Describe increases in visitor shares without inferring growing interest, and explicitly note that the 55+ group became the second-largest category.

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