The response provides a clear overview, accurate figures and relevant comparisons across both years. Combining the two youngest bands is defensible, but the claim of growing interest goes beyond the age-share data.
8.0Ideas are logically sequenced with a clear overview, well-managed paragraphing, and cohesive devices such as 'This was followed by' and 'By 2003' that guide the reader effortlessly.
8.0Vocabulary is flexible and precise, using varied expressions like 'consistently predominant', 'exhibited a decline', and 'rose significantly' with natural, accurate collocation.
8.0GRAGrammatical Range and Accuracy
A wide range of structures is used with strong control, including accurate participial phrases, passive forms, and complex comparative constructions, with only rare minor slips.
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