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Cambridge IELTS 17 General Training Writing

Four Writing tests with 8 officially scored candidate responses and examiner comments.

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Cambridge IELTS 17 · General Training

Writing Test 1

Writing Task 1

Letter writing

Time
20 min
Minimum
150 words
Official Band
6.0

Your English-speaking friend who lives in your town has asked for your advice about learning a new sport.

Write an email to your friend. In your email • recommend a new sport that would be suitable for your friend to learn • explain how your friend could learn this sport • suggest that you both learn this sport together.

You do NOT need to write any addresses.

Begin your letter as follows: Dear ……………,

Response as published

179 words

Dear Vanessa,

I am very glad to write this letter for you. I recognised that you are looking for an advice about a new sport to learn. Well, I would suggest you a very popular sport in my town, which is basketball. All my friends are interested in this activity. Indeed, there is a great club around my house where they perfectly teach how to play this sport. You can register and start your sessions right away. You will be introduced to all the informations: rules, movements, tricks and so on. I am sure you will enjoy it and I believe that playing basketball would suit you well as you have the physical potential for it.

I personally am a huge fan of basketball, but I have not had the opportunity to learn it. So, I think I might join you to the club if you consider my advice to you. That would be a wonderful idea!

I hope my letter will satisfie your needs and I will be looking foreward to recieving your answer.

Take care,

You friend

Writing Task 2

Essay writing

Time
40 min
Minimum
250 words
Official Band
7.0

In the future, people may no longer be able to pay for things in shops using cash. All payments may have to be made by card or using phones.

Do you think this will happen one day?

Why do you think some people might not be happy to give up using cash?

Response as published

235 words

Technology has found its way into every aspect of our lives, including the way we pay for things in shops. Following this trend, I believe we will not need to use cash in the future.

First of all, generations that have grown with technology, have become dependant on multiple devices to perform even the simplest tasks. Millennials and people from the ‘y’ generation can be seen holding their phones at all times, which makes it easier for them to process payments with something they already have on their hands.

Moreover, as fashion is also playing a very important role in our society, being able to process payments with an electronic device as a card, is not only saving us time in counting cash, but also space when it comes to carrying thing. As a plus, it gets rid of the jinggling sound of coins in our bags. This can be seen on a day to day basis when both, men and women, are getting ready to go out. Taking only their phone, a couple of cards and their keys.

However, for some people this might not be functional as it brings extra charges on our accounts for using eftpos machines.

To conclude, even though there are both advocates and detractors for giving up using cash, I believe that our obsession with technology is a slippery slope that will eventually end on us giving up cash.

Cambridge IELTS 17 · General Training

Writing Test 2

Writing Task 1

Letter writing

Time
20 min
Minimum
150 words
Official Band
5.0

The parents of your Australian friend Chris have invited you to a surprise birthday party for him/her.

Write a letter to Chris’s parents. In your letter • say why you think Chris will enjoy the surprise party • explain why you won’t be able to attend the party • give details of a plan to see Chris at a different time.

You do NOT need to write any addresses.

Begin your letter as follows: Dear Mr and Mrs Collins,

Response as published

168 words

Dear Mr and Mrs Collins,

I hope you are well both of you. I am writing to chris’s parents because they celebrate my friend surprise birthday party.

Yes, I think chris will very happy because he is feeling good. His birthday celebration some different types of give party. because he is coming from india sometimes so, he will enjoy this party.

I do not able to party because my father was heart attack in two days. I am going to Dehli and he is not well and Doctor says my father have a done angioplasty. So I have here in ten days. then I will come home together my father.

Let you know about I am meet chris after sometime and when my father is well then I will meet you and together with travelling outside. I have many planned but this time I am not able to meet you as well as I will meet you soon chris.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours sincerely,

Writing Task 2

Essay writing

Time
40 min
Minimum
250 words
Official Band
7.0

In some countries, more and more people are hiring a personal fitness trainer, rather than playing sports or doing exercise classes.

What are the reasons for this?

Is this a positive or a negative development?

Response as published

274 words

The practice of training physically with personal fitness guides is getting increasingly common in some nations. Therefore playing sports or taking part in physical exercise courses are less preferred. From my perspective, this acts as a desirable development as it provides people with a multitude of benefits.

The growing need for personal trainers can be attributed to the following reasons. Firstly, due to the speedy pace of modern life, people are getting busier with their jobs as well as basic daily chores such as housework. As a result, taking part in a mutual exercise classes is quite impossible for busy people, as they can hardly flexify themselves with the schedules of other class members. Hiring a personal trainer seems to be the most appropriate resolution to the problem, since people will no longer depend on others’ timetable and they can do exercise with their trainers whenever they have free time. Secondly, joining a mutual class offers people few opportunities to have private conversations with the teachers. The reason is that there are often a large number of learners in a class and teachers can hardly answer all members' questions. Unlikewise, personal trainers are responsible for one student per class, which enables students to have more time to consult their teachers.

The increasing demand for personal trainer has made significant improvements to modern people's lives. It is a new and suitable way of managing time efficiently, especially for those who have a little fund of time.

In conclusion, I hold a strong belief that hiring personal fitness trainer, which is time-saving and of remarkable convenience, has made positive changes to the way people doing exercise.

Cambridge IELTS 17 · General Training

Writing Test 3

Writing Task 1

Letter writing

Time
20 min
Minimum
150 words
Official Band
6.0

You recently booked a part-time course at a college. You now need to cancel your booking.

Write a letter to the college administrator. In your letter • say which part-time course you booked • explain why you need to cancel your booking • ask about booking a different course

You do NOT need to write any addresses.

Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

Response as published

172 words

Dear Sir or Madam,

My name is Gonzalo and as you already know I have booked in one of your part-time courses, Business Administration. I would like to know if there is a possibility to change my course.

I chose this program because I wanted to improve my knowledge on that specific area, as you know I have been working for 10 years to have my job. However, recently a great friend offered me a opportunity to work as a graphic designer in his own company. To be honest, I am about to make the biggest change in my career ever.

The main reason why I am getting in contact with you is because I need to change my program and find a new one in my new area. Is there any necessary arrangements for booking a different course? Should I pay an extra fee to be able to change? How exactly works to change to a different course? Those are my questions and I am need of some guidance.

Best regards!

Writing Task 2

Essay writing

Time
40 min
Minimum
250 words
Official Band
7.0

It is better to buy just a few expensive clothes, rather than lots of cheaper clothes.

Do you agree or disagree?

Response as published

285 words

The clothing and fashion market in one of the largest in options and price level. It is possible to find a wild range of stores and manufacturers across the cities and malls all around. However, what are the quality offered and what is the budget people are willing to spend on it? In which situation expensive tailored clothing are better than cheapen numerous clothes?

Some say that prioritising quality is always better, as well as having exclusivity. Needless to say that having a good wardrobe with high quality clothing is a dream for most women, since our attires are way more demanding than the simplicity of male style. In my opinion, is a wonderful feeling to purchase something of greater price as one can be sure about the durability and clear better appearance of the product.

The second option, having the capability of purchasing clothes in big quantities for a lower price, has its downsides. One of them is that quality is not the main concern, whenever in a popular store is possible to find objective peaces among the piles. Another point is durability, the bigger the role the less the products will last. Every laundry load is a struggle with pieces loosing color and fabric thickness. It is also valid to point out that they are made in large scale and it is not difficult to see random people wearing the same shirt. In the long term people will spend around the same amount of money replacing their low cost clothes, what refutates the positive side of spending less.

In conclusion, good quality clothing under higher price basis can be of advantage in many ways in comparison to more popular and less expensive products.

Cambridge IELTS 17 · General Training

Writing Test 4

Writing Task 1

Letter writing

Time
20 min
Minimum
150 words
Official Band
5.5

You have bought some clothing online and are not satisfied with your purchase.

Write a letter to the company that you bought the clothing from. In your email • give details of the purchase • describe the problem • explain why you need a replacement urgently

You do NOT need to write any addresses.

Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

Response as published

190 words

Dear Sir or Madam

My name is Sam I broght throght your websit a suit for my.sister wedding, two day ago I got the suit I order and I was so happy because it's arrived on time.

When I open the box with the suit I decided to try it to make sure I got the right size and it's fit me, unfortunately when I try it I found out the top part of the suit it to small and the fonts is to big. What mean I can't wear it at all and also mean I need to packet and send it bake to you and with again for the right size.

I need to replace it as soon as possible because my sister wedding is in two weeks time in Greece and I flying there next Tuesday which mean I have less then a week to get my right order with the right size and make sure its fits me and fly there.

I appreciate your awarnec for the short time from we have case mistak is happened to help be ready to my sister wedding.

Kind regards

Writing Task 2

Essay writing

Time
40 min
Minimum
250 words
Official Band
6.5

Some people think that it’s a good idea to socialise with work colleagues during evenings and weekends. Other people think it’s important to keep working life completely separate from social life.

Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Response as published

312 words

Since our job take the majority of our daytime (or nighttime, that's depend on the job) our colleagues are a important part of our social life. We see them everyday and we usually have to interact with them many times. Do those interactions have to stay strictly professionnal or is it better including them in our private life?

First, that's depend on everyone's personnality. Some people are good to keep distance during the working time's interaction, keep neutral conversations and separate clearly the private life and professionnal life. On a other side, some people can't control it and their personnality will push them to be friendly with people who they get along with or be distant to people with who they feel inconfortable.

In fact, it is important to feel good at work. A heavy atmosphere caused by tensions between coworkers could effect very badly out life even when we come back home.

Socialize with the work colleagues in the free time can be a good occasion to know people better, away from the working stress and pressure. We can discover another part of their personnality, hobbies, or personnal problems and then we can be more able to understand them during hard time at work.

Of course sometime in an other hand some matters can appear when the line between private and professionnal life start to be fuzzy. For example, when two coworkers become a couple and continue to work together or when a friendship between two coworkers can be gossips' start point.

But since we are all humans with our own sensitive points, it is important to be to keep a good atmosphere at work by speaking out all the problems to release all the tensions. Communication is the key but also sharing a good time with coworkers away from work can be a nice way to understand more each other.