Importance of Having at Least One Hobby

Suggested change: HavingHaving1Consider having Suggested change: at leastat least2atleast one hobby for Suggested change: individuals of any ageindividuals of any age3any age groups individual is very significant for their better lifestyle and health.In my opinion, hobbies can help people to live more happily and Suggested change: makemake4makes each day of their life productive.The following Suggested change: paragraphs consistparagraphs consist5paragraph consist of the reasons why one Suggested change: shouldshould6shuold occupy themselves with some activity.

The first and the foremost reason is that, small kids, young people, working individuals and Suggested change: those who arethose who are7the one who are sitting at their home after retiring from their work in their life Suggested change: when they have free timewhen they have free time8when they had free time they waste their time usually on mobiles which subsequently harms their health.If they Suggested change: opt for one hobbyopt for one hobby9opt one hobby such as Suggested change: going to the gymgoing to the gym10going to gym it will automatically engage them with something which will help them in keeping their health in good condition.To Suggested change: illustrateillustrate11illustarte, my grandfather is in Suggested change: his late eightieshis late eighties12their late 80's, as he is very old he is not Suggested change: able to do any physical activityable to do any physical activity13able to any physical activity and Suggested change: he always complainshe always complains14he always complain about not having anything to do in his free time because of that he became an irritated person, Suggested change: if he had chosen a hobbyif he had chosen a hobby15if he would have choosen hobby to do at this age, he Suggested change: would have felt his day was productivewould have felt his day was productive16must have feel his day productive instead of not doing anything.

Involvement of Suggested change: individuals of every ageindividuals of every age17every age individual with some kind of hobby keeps them busy which leads to their minds not going to develop wrong ideas.For example, my friend Suggested change: started playing a game and became addictedstarted playing a game and became addicted18was started playing game and become addictive to it which affects her eyesight.If Suggested change: she had chosenshe had chosen19he would have choosen some outdoor game such as volleyball Suggested change: she would not suffershe would not suffer20he would not suffer from weak eyesight.

In conclusion, I would say Suggested change: at leastat least21atlest one good hobby should be Suggested change: chosenchosen22choosen by young, old,working and retired people to make themselves active and alive in their life. Otherwise, they will end up having health issues.