With the advent of technology and computers, our lives have totally changed. Today, we see computers being used in every sphere of life; be it, at offices to store massive data; be it, at colleges to help research works or by housewives to learn new recipes. Though admittedly, use of computers can also be done in negative ways, but I think there are more pros than cons, and computers have certainly made lives easier for everyone. With computers, access to information has become very easy. It is immensely helping financial institutions, and big businesses to store and use data for constructive purposes. In earlier days, all the business transactional data was and managing these files and searching for information was a cumbersome task. Computers have also helped students in a great way. Now, instead of going to teachers, they can browse for information online. They can find multiple research papers and . For instance, when I was , I finished my secondary research on the internet and read about 100 online books to complete my thesis. I could study at my own pace and in a comfortable home environment. Another area where computers have helped us is in the communication field. It enables us to keep in touch with our by means of internet chats, video calls like skype, VOIP, social networking sites and various applications. Though I agree, we can contact each other by phone also, but phone calls are quite expensive especially international calls, but now we can and friends; and often see them without spending . Emails have revolutionised the business communication world and aptly made them a formal mode of communication and documentation. But, , the most significant in the field of scientific research like building satellites, thermal power plants and in . We can now predict weather and natural calamities and hence take precautionary steps to save human lives. Computers have successfully forecasted cyclones like Katrina, Praline, Tsunami etc. and timely evacuation was made to save thousands of human lives. Similarly, computers also play vital roles in the most of the weapons are controlled by computers in safeguarding the country. In a nutshell, computers have become a crucial part of our lives. It is rightly said that the world is constantly shrinking and everyone is getting close to each other by use of computers.
Do Computers Make Life Easier or More Stressful
While some people opine that computers have made our life more convenient and easier, others, however, oppose it and say that computers have actually made our life more complex and stressful. What is your opinion on this?
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Overall assessment
Why this response received Band 7.0
The response presents a clear position and supports it with well-chosen, extended examples across information access, education, communication, and scientific research. Its strongest aspect is the relevant and personalised development of ideas. The main limitation is a noticeable accumulation of grammatical and usage errors, along with occasionally informal phrasing, that reduces precision.
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Task Response
7.0The response addresses the opinion task directly with a clear position and develops several relevant main ideas with concrete examples, though some support is generic and the counterargument is only lightly treated.
Coherence and Cohesion
7.0Ideas progress logically across well-separated areas with a clear introduction and conclusion, but cohesion is sometimes mechanical and semicolon use produces overly long, loosely linked sentences.
Lexical Resource
7.0Vocabulary is sufficiently wide and mostly precise for the topic, including phrases like cumbersome task and revolutionised, though slips such as loved once and without spending the extra penny reduce precision.
Grammatical Range and Accuracy
6.5A range of complex structures is attempted and meaning is generally clear, but frequent errors in subject-verb agreement, word forms, and comma-spliced constructions are noticeable throughout.
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