Do Computers Make Life Easier or More Stressful

The first computer was invented in 1822 by Charles Babbage, and it was used for basic arithmetic calculation. For some people, the computer has made their life easier. For other humans, computers have made their lifestyle more stressful. Suggested change: The way I see it is that computersThe way I see it is that computers1The way I see is that the computers are essential in our life and Suggested change: they make many kinds of jobs easierthey make many kinds of jobs easier2they make easy many kinds of jobs like the jobs of an accountant and an engineer. And it also makes life more colourful. On the other hand, the computer is dangerous for youngsters. Nowadays, computers have a lot of games about war and zombies. Doctors think that games like these can change their mind to have negative impressions and thought. At first, computers make people happy, but Suggested change: on the other hand,on the other hand,3on the other side, computers can change teenagers’ mind Suggested change: through gamesthrough games4with the way of games or the internet. Secondly, sitting at a computer too much Suggested change: can damage people's eyesight.can damage people's eyesight.5can be damage human's eyesight. But for this inventors created the glasses against worsening eyesight. Thirdly, Suggested change: it can make people lazy,it can make people lazy,6it can do people slothful, for instance, if workers play games Suggested change: during working hoursduring working hours7at working time Suggested change: instead of working hard.instead of working hard.8in order to work hard. However, Suggested change: for every negative aspect, there is a positive one.for every negative aspect, there is a positive one.9every minus there is plus. The major advantage is that, with computers Suggested change: you can reach your goals easily.you can reach your goals easily.10you can do reach to points easily. For example, if you work on some projects, you can do lightly videos with computer helps. Suggested change: Another positive aspectAnother positive aspect11Next positive side is improving knowledge by a computer, like reading and solving the critical issues. Looking thirdly at a positive side, you can save some documents or pictures which are valuable for you. Taking everything into account, I believe that Suggested change: in the near futurein the near future12in near future by computers you can do almost everything. Nevertheless, in today's world, working on computers Suggested change: makes work easier.makes work easier.13can do works easier. Despite working easy, it can seriously Suggested change: harmharm14give harm to your health.