one of the essential parts of our daily life. Many people of today's society are of the opinion that of modern science which make our life more while others oppose this concept but my inclination is toward the former. On one hand, it is argued that , and complicated now. The most vital point for the demand which can initially be mentioned is that excessive technology based recent life. For example, modern school education systems are mainly computer based so students have no opportunity to even small subtraction and addition they cannot count without a computer. Besides Children are too much addicted to computer games rather than other outdoor activities and finally our future generation are becoming more machine dependent and physically disable and it results seems like in near future horror science fiction will be true. A further point is that and viruses are like natural disasters and make our life literally impossible. On the other hand, there are quite plausible reasons of our everyday life. What can be cited first regarding this is due to communication and information technology . Anyone can reach any corner of the world within in a second. There are so many ways to communicate with each other such as email, online chatting, voice mail, video chat etc. To clarify this matter from home in a job interview, conference or any online class. He/she does not need to go there physically but in the digital world, it is possible. What's more online marketing, banking etc. make our life more convenient so we can enjoy a strong personal relationship. , any business and official work can be accomplished efficiently because of electronic data management, for instance, electronic files are easily stored and maintained rather than paper documents. In a nutshell taking all the aforementioned pros and cons into account, I personally opine that computer is the most wonderful gift of our life.
Do Computers Make Life Easier or More Stressful
While some people opine that computers have made our life more convenient and easier, others, however, oppose it and say that computers have actually made our life more complex and stressful. What is your opinion on this?
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Overall assessment
Why this response received Band 6.0
The response covers both views and states a clear opinion, and the vocabulary is generally adequate for the topic. However, ideas are developed unevenly, paragraph organisation is weak with the whole argument compressed into large blocks, and frequent grammatical errors regularly strain clarity, limiting the overall effectiveness.
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Task Response
6.0Both perspectives are addressed and a clear personal position is stated and reiterated, but supporting ideas such as the education and addiction examples are underdeveloped and expressed imprecisely at times.
Coherence and Cohesion
5.5Progression is broadly followable with some linking devices, but paragraphing is weak, transitions are formulaic or misapplied, and idea flow within long stretches is mechanical.
Lexical Resource
6.0There is a sufficient range of topic-related vocabulary and some idiomatic attempts, though word choice errors such as 'physically disable' and 'blessings' reduce precision.
Grammatical Range and Accuracy
5.5A mix of simple and complex structures is attempted, but frequent errors in agreement, articles, and verb forms sometimes impede meaning.
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