With the tremendous advancement in technology nowadays, the computer affects people’s way of life. Though this device has become an inevitable part of our personal and professional life, some people worry that the dependency on computers can only increase complexity in life. Some people strongly support that our life has become easier, more convenient and productive due to the usages of computers, while some people say that computers make life more complex and stressful. I personally believe very useful in helping people in daily activities and the advantages it offers are far greater than the few disadvantages it has. Regarding the views on both sides, some people have doubtful opinions toward the The statement “what is the computer for? – can simply answer their doubts. Computers can be viewed as one of the humans’ masterpieces which were invented to help us to make things faster For instance, thousands of times faster and The role a computer plays in our life is unavoidable. They are used everywhere- in hospitals, in labs, in banks, in research centres in the defence department, traffic controlling, manufacturing, quality assurance and so on. It is so much easier and faster to do something with the help of a computer than doing it manually. Thus, in terms of time and Many risky jobs are now done by computers and this has in such risky workplaces. Thus computers are to save the human, not to destroy their life. However, advocating the other opinion that computers make life more complex is supposed to be true from computer usage. on the individual, and wise use of this device has almost zero negative effect. Moreover, using a computer does not make life stressful, because of its simplicity and entertaining nature and usages. Music, movies, computer games and websites that we enjoy using a computer are meant to entertain us, not to increase our stress level. In conclusion, it is evident that computers make our life easier and more convenient by helping us
Do Computers Make Life Easier or More Stressful
While some people opine that computers have made our life more convenient and easier, others, however, oppose it and say that computers have actually made our life more complex and stressful. What is your opinion on this?
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Why this response received Band 6.0
The response presents a clear opinion that computers' benefits outweigh their drawbacks and supports it with relevant examples from work, safety, and entertainment. The main limitation is repetitive, sometimes imprecise phrasing and loosely connected ideas that weaken the overall persuasiveness.
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Task Response
6.5The position is clear and consistently maintained, with main ideas relevant and partially developed through examples, though some points remain general and repetitively stated rather than fully extended.
Coherence and Cohesion
5.5The response has a broadly understandable sequence of benefits, a concession and a conclusion, but all the material is in one paragraph. Repeated claims and loosely connected sentences make it harder to identify and follow distinct central ideas.
Lexical Resource
6.0Vocabulary is adequate for the topic with some attempts at less common items, but inaccuracies such as 'addicted effects' and 'casualty' and frequent repetition limit precision.
Grammatical Range and Accuracy
6.5A mix of simple and complex structures is used with generally clear meaning, though errors in agreement, article use, and phrasing occur with some regularity without impeding communication.
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