Australian Beachfront Area Maps 1950 and Today

The maps below show a beachfront area in Australia in 1950 and the same area today.

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The maps illustrate the development of an Australian beachfront area between 1950 and the present day.

Overall, the beachfront area has been expanded and modernized, with new facilities, extra parking and a longer pool added, while the lighthouse remains unchanged.

In 1950, a single car park, a pavilion and a cluster of dining tables were situated directly behind the beach along the main street, with a children’s playground occupying the north‑western corner. Central to the shore stood a 25‑metre pool, and on the far south‑east point a lone lighthouse

Today, the former playground site hosts a restaurant and and a second parking area has been added at the north‑east corner. The original pool has been extended to 50 metres, and two surf clubs now flank both the pavilion and the pool. Aside from these enhancements, the lighthouse remains in its original south‑eastern location.

Overall assessment

Why this response received Band 7.0

The response has a clear overview, logical chronological organisation and well-controlled language. It correctly identifies the enlargement of the western pool. However, several map details are inaccurate: the former playground becomes a car park, the restaurant is farther south, and the eastern car park and eastern pool were already present.

IELTS criteria

How each score was decided

Task Achievement

6.0

There is a clear overview of development, and the enlargement of the western pool is correctly reported. However, the response overlooks the original eastern pool, wrongly places the restaurant at the former playground, and describes the existing eastern car park as newly added.

Coherence and Cohesion

7.0

The response is logically organised with a clear overview, a chronological contrast between the two periods, and cohesive referencing that guides the reader throughout.

Lexical Resource

7.0

Vocabulary is flexible and precise for describing map change, with items such as 'cluster', 'flank', 'occupying' and 'modernized' used naturally and accurately.

Grammatical Range and Accuracy

7.0

A wide range of structures is used with good control, including varied passive and participial constructions, with only rare minor slips that do not impede meaning.