Searching for Medical Solutions on the Internet

The response addresses both questions fully, states a clear and consistent position, and develops the reasons and dangers with relevant examples, though some points are repeated rather than extended.

Ideas progress logically across clear paragraphs with effective linking devices, although some repetition of the same idea slightly weakens the sense of development.

Vocabulary is flexible and topic-appropriate, including misdiagnosis, cyberchondria and stigma. Some phrasing is repetitive or awkward, especially “the excessive searching of health-related topics”, but the intended argument remains clear.

A wide range of complex structures is used with generally good control, and errors such as the occasionally awkward relative clause do not impede communication.

The essay addresses both questions and maintains a clear negative position, explaining accessibility, privacy and the risks of self-diagnosis and self-medication. The examples are relevant, but remain general, and the two risk paragraphs overlap on incorrect treatment and worsening health.

Ideas progress logically with appropriate paragraphing and linking devices, though cohesion is at times mechanical and the first body paragraph's reasons could be more sharply signposted.

Vocabulary is wide and precise (furnish, jeopardize, exacerbate), but some phrases are overused or slightly unnatural in their density of formal collocations.

A broad range of complex structures is used with flexibility and control, with only rare, non-impeding slips in phrasing.

The response addresses both questions with a clear negative position and relevant explanations of convenience, empowerment and health risks. The individual-health argument is developed, although the claimed public-health impact and the empowerment mechanism could be made more explicit.

Ideas progress logically through sequenced paragraphs with effective cohesive devices and clear referencing, producing a coherent and easy-to-follow argument.

Vocabulary is wide and precise, with natural collocations such as 'exacerbate existing health conditions' and 'masquerading as legitimate medical advice', and only occasional minor awkwardness like 'I consider it as a negative development'.

A broad range of complex structures is used with strong control, including relative clauses, concessive phrasing and parallel lists. The construction “consider it as a negative development” is a minor lapse that does not obscure meaning.