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Food Traveling Long Distances to Reach Consumers

Today, food travels thousands of miles from farms before it reaches consumers in urban areas.

Why is this the case? Is this a positive or negative trend?

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Response 01

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Essay · 315 words · 4 paragraphs · 14 comments

Score details

Response 01
Estimated band7.5/ 9

Overall assessment

The response addresses both questions, explaining urban demand and improved distribution and taking a broadly negative position. It uses a wide academic vocabulary and varied complex sentences. However, the environmental argument needs a clearer link between long-distance transport and high-yield farming, and the conclusion could state the overall judgment more directly. A subject–verb agreement error and some imprecise references also need attention.

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Task Response

Both questions are addressed through urban demand, improved distribution and a broadly negative evaluation. The economic concern is relevant, but the link between food transport and high-yield farming needs explanation, and the final judgment remains conditional.

8.0
CC

Coherence and Cohesion

Progression is logical with clear paragraph purposes and effective referencing, though a few transitions and referential links are slightly loose or overly compressed.

7.0
LR

Lexical Resource

Vocabulary is flexible and precise, with natural academic collocations such as 'necessitating importation,' 'climatic and soil conditions,' and 'irreversible consequences.'

8.0
GRA

Grammatical Range and Accuracy

A wide range of complex structures is used with generally good control, though errors such as 'the increased distance food travels are' and occasional awkward constructions are noticeable.

7.0

What to work on next

Explain how long-distance distribution creates the ecological risk you identify, then make your overall judgment explicit in the conclusion. Also check that the main verb agrees with the singular subject “distance”.

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