It is ten years since you left college. You'd like to organise an event to celebrate this anniversary with all your friends and classmates from college.
Write a letter to one of your college friends. In your letter
• say what kind of celebration event you'd like to organise
• explain why you think it would be good to celebrate in this way
• describe what help you need to organise this event
Dear ....................................,
Dear all my college mates
Hope this letter finds you well and believe you are in good health and in high spirits.I am writing this letter to informe you that I am going to invite all my friends my home for 10th anniversary as we all completed 10 years separtion since all we graduated from college.
As you know it been so long since we all people last meet so this party soul purpose to re-unite everyone and share our gossip. Furthermore , as I going to married next month so you guys can consider this party as bachleour party too. Party is going to mix of dance and food .
Moving further as I am going to invite all my best friends I want you all to come before one day at my home so that we can shared our eating choices as I remember few Person are vegetarian some can eat meat too and few ones might have any kind of allegeries .
In this last , hopefully everyone will come and looking forward to hear positive response from your side.
Yours truly,
Navdeep
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Response 02
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Hi Lokesh,
I hope you are doing good. I am writing this letter to organise a small get-together for our ten-year anniversary in college. I am planning to book a small cafe or banquet hall for our party , which was very famous in our college days.
Another reason for this meet up is to recall all our memories and fun times that we left behind in college. This particular location for our party is perfect for all our friends as it's near everyone's home. At our meetup we can organise some fun games so that all close friends get a chance to indulge in them.
Along with that, I am thinking of adding a session of five-minute pep talk where each person can speak about their ongoing life. I just need a small favour from you to make this party successful. As it's been ten years now , two of our close friends , Ashish and Shubham, recently changed their contact numbers , and I have their old numbers. If you can connect with them, we would be grateful.
Waiting for your response on this.
Thanks,
Nik
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Response 03
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Dear Anaya,
I hope you are doing well. Can you believe it has already been ten years since we graduated from college? To mark this special milestone, I am planning a small reunion event and would love for you to be involved. I am thinking of organising an evening gathering at the Lakeside Banquet Hall, where we could have dinner, music, and a short slideshow of our college memories.
I feel this would be a wonderful way to celebrate because it would allow everyone to reconnect in a relaxed and enjoyable setting. Many of us have moved to different cities, and this reunion would give us a chance to catch up, share our journeys, and relive some of the fun moments we had during those years.
I would really appreciate your help with contacting our classmates and managing the guest list, as you still stay in touch with most of them. Please also let me know if you have any suggestions for the venue or programme.
Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Warm regards,
Trisha
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From essays on this question
Useful vocabulary
evening gathering
Meaning
A social event where people meet in the evening.
From the essay
I am thinking of organising an evening gathering at the Lakeside Banquet Hall, where we could have dinner, music, and a short slideshow of our college memories.
Talk to people you know and learn what has happened in their lives.
From the essay
Many of us have moved to different cities, and this reunion would give us a chance to catch up, share our journeys, and relive some of the fun moments we had during those years.
