筹办大学毕业十周年同学聚会

Organising a Ten-Year College Reunion Celebration

It is ten years since you left college. You'd like to organise an event to celebrate this anniversary with all your friends and classmates from college.

Write a letter to one of your college friends. In your letter

• say what kind of celebration event you'd like to organise

• explain why you think it would be good to celebrate in this way

• describe what help you need to organise this event

Dear ....................................,

你离开大学已经十年了。你想组织一场活动,与你所有的大学朋友和同学一起庆祝这个周年纪念。

给你的一位大学朋友写一封信。在信中

• 说明你想组织哪种庆祝活动

• 解释你为什么认为以这种方式庆祝会很好

• 描述你需要什么帮助来组织这次活动

Dear ....................................,

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书信要点:筹办大学毕业十周年同学聚会

为什么这是非正式书信 ,要求你用友好的语气回应每个提示点。

所以我们按题目列出的每个提示点整理要点。

Say what kind of celebration event you'd like to organise

5个要点

Explain why you think it would be good to celebrate in this way

7个要点

Describe what help you need to organise this event

6个要点

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估算分数6.0/ 9

总体评价

The letter addresses all three required bullet points and maintains a friendly, appropriate tone for a college friend, with the celebration idea and requested help both developed. The main limitation is recurring grammatical inaccuracy, particularly in verb forms and agreement, which occasionally disrupts clarity despite the message remaining broadly understandable.

TA

任务完成情况

The letter covers all three bullet points with a clear celebratory event, reasons for it, and a request for help with dietary arrangements, though the greeting to a group rather than one named friend and some loosely relevant details slightly reduce precision of purpose.

6.0
CC

连贯与衔接

Ideas progress in a broadly logical order with linking phrases such as 'Furthermore' and 'Moving further', but some transitions are mechanical and relationships between sentences are occasionally unclear.

6.0
LR

词汇丰富度

Vocabulary is adequate for the informal purpose and shows some attempted range, yet noticeable errors in word choice and spelling such as 'soul purpose' and 'bachleour' reduce precision.

6.0
GRA

语法多样性与准确性

A mix of simple and complex structures is attempted, but frequent errors in verb forms and agreement, such as 'I going to married' and 'it been so long', mean accuracy is limited and meaning is strained at times.

5.5

下一步改进重点

Revise basic sentence grammar, especially verb tense, agreement, and subject-verb construction, by proofreading each sentence before finalising the letter.

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