The response covers all four series and gives a useful overview, but the final total is reported as about 5 million tonnes instead of just over 3. It also understates the substantial proportional fall in household emissions. Transport is broadly stable, with small fluctuations that could be described more precisely.
6.0Ideas are logically sequenced from overview to detail, with cohesive devices such as 'whereas', 'in comparison', and 'in contrast' used naturally, though a few references are slightly loose.
7.0The response uses a varied range of trend vocabulary, including “downtrend” and “plunge”, but precision is uneven. “Sources” sometimes substitutes for emission quantities, “six times less than the number of Industry” is awkward, and “minimally” mischaracterises the household decline.
7.0GRAGrammatical Range and Accuracy
A wide range of structures is used accurately, including complex relative and contrastive clauses, with errors rare and not impeding meaning.
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