Police Budget Sources and Spending in Britain

The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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Key features: Police Budget Sources and Spending in Britain

WhyThis is aMixed charts task — it asks you to connect the main patterns across two visuals.

SoWe split the points intoOverview(the main point of each chart)andKey features(figures and comparisons worth reporting).

Overview

3 points

Key features

7 points

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Score details

Response 01
Estimated band7.5/ 9

Overall assessment

The strongest aspect is the accurate, complete coverage of both visual sources, with all key figures correctly reported and meaningful comparisons drawn across the two years. The main limitation is somewhat formulaic linking and occasional mechanical use of connectors, which keeps the writing short of fully natural progression.

TA

Task Achievement

The response covers all data from the table and both pie charts accurately, including totals, percentage shifts, and the unchanged buildings and transport share, with a clear overview of rising funding and shifting expenditure priorities.

8.0
CC

Coherence and Cohesion

Information is logically grouped into sources and spending with a clear progression, though cohesion relies on somewhat mechanical connectors and repeated framing phrases.

7.0
LR

Lexical Resource

Vocabulary is flexible and precise for describing change, with terms like 'substantial surge' and 'modest uptick', but some phrasing such as 'primary focus of the budget' is slightly imprecise for expenditure.

7.0
GRA

Grammatical Range and Accuracy

A wide range of structures is used accurately, including complex sentences with participial and relative elements, with only rare minor awkwardness affecting an otherwise controlled grammatical performance.

7.0

What to work on next

Vary cohesive devices and integrate comparisons more naturally within sentences rather than relying on repeated connectors such as 'in contrast' and 'specifically'.

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Useful vocabulary: Police Budget Sources and Spending in Britain

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Sentence patterns: Police Budget Sources and Spending in Britain

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