Daily Oil Production in Four Countries (2000–2004)

The table below shows daily oil production in 4 countries from 2000 to 2004.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

From essays on this question

Key features: Daily Oil Production in Four Countries (2000–2004)

WhyThis is aTable — it asks you to group and compare the key figures.

SoWe split the points intoOverview(the main patterns in the table)andKey features(figures and comparisons worth reporting).

Overview

3 points

Key features

6 points

Same question · Different responses

Sample responses and feedback

Response 01

Must fixSuggested

Answer · 171 words · 4 paragraphs · 9 comments

Score details

Response 01
Estimated band7.0/ 9

Overall assessment

The response covers all four countries, selects useful endpoint figures, and groups the larger and smaller producers logically. However, its overview needs to acknowledge Nigeria overtaking Congo and Chad matching Somalia in 2004. Nigeria’s overall increase is valid, although its early decline could be clearer. Language issues include the connector before Congo’s decline and the unsupported reference to production capability.

TA

Task Achievement

The response covers all four countries and reports useful endpoint figures accurately. The overview overstates the continuity of the rankings: Nigeria leads in 2004, when Chad and Somalia tie. Nigeria rises overall despite an early decline, and production capability is not measured.

7.0
CC

Coherence and Cohesion

Ideas progress logically from overview to detail, with larger producers grouped together and smaller producers compared separately. The connector introducing Congo’s decline is faulty, while the stacked participles in the final sentence make the sequence less direct.

7.0
LR

Lexical Resource

Vocabulary is flexible and appropriate for describing data, with items like 'fluctuated', 'gradually decreased', and 'sharply increasing', showing good range with only minor imprecision such as 'boosted its production capability'.

7.0
GRA

Grammatical Range and Accuracy

A wide range of structures, including participle phrases and complex sentences, is used with generally good control, and occasional errors remain non-impeding.

7.0

What to work on next

Qualify the overview with Nigeria’s 2004 lead and the Chad–Somalia tie. Distinguish overall increases from yearly movements, and replace the faulty “however” construction with a correctly punctuated coordinating conjunction.

From essays on this question

Useful vocabulary: Daily Oil Production in Four Countries (2000–2004)

From essays on this question

Sentence patterns: Daily Oil Production in Four Countries (2000–2004)

Practise this question

Write your response

Task 1 Academic question loaded.
Part 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Write at least 150 words.

Words: 020:00 starts on first word