the innovation of technology has brought into a new world. some people believe its advantages over the disadvantages. however, i view on it. doubtlessly, the advances of nuclear technology benefit people in many ways. the invention of nuclear generator provides thousand times electricity than the traditional one does. also, instead of burning fossil fuel, it emits no carbon dioxide to the surroundings, which is recognised as the only solution to solve global warming and continuously supplies adequate power. besides, nuclear weapons are powerful terrorist activities. although the nuclear energy generation the energy crisis all over the world, it is highly hazardous not only to nearby citizens but also nations. last year, the tsunami in Japan and caused massive leakage. this accident contaminated nearby countries are affected. countless kinds of species are mutated, which the harmful consequences are still unknown. the incident to all organisms. furthermore, countries are competing to hold as possible. they claim that such weapons are simply . however, the is more than enough to destroy the entire world several times. in my opinion, it is questionable that maintaining national peace by such scary weapons. , nuclear technology is beneficial to mankind . meanwhile, it also poses life-threatening hazards to all species. i the worthiness of risking people's lives to obtain temporary merits.
Benefits and Disadvantages of Nuclear Technology
The threat of nuclear weapons maintains world peace and nuclear power provides cheap and clean energy. The benefits of nuclear technology far outweigh the disadvantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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Why this response received Band 6.5
The response maintains a clear disagreement: it acknowledges energy benefits but concludes that the risks to life are not justified. Relevant arguments and a concrete example support that stance. The main limitations are overgeneralised claims and frequent grammatical and word-form errors, which reduce precision and occasionally make sentences difficult to follow.
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Task Response
6.5The response maintains disagreement while acknowledging benefits and discussing risks to safety and peace. It develops relevant points with an example, but some claims are overgeneralised, such as presenting nuclear power as the only solution to global warming, and need fuller justification.
Coherence and Cohesion
6.5Ideas are arranged into logical paragraphs with generally clear progression, but linking devices such as 'doubtlessly', 'besides' and 'meanwhile' are sometimes mechanical or imprecise.
Lexical Resource
6.0There is an adequate range of topic-related vocabulary (reactant leakage, energy crisis, hazardous), but imprecise collocations like 'thousand times electricity' and 'defences to against' limit flexibility and accuracy.
Grammatical Range and Accuracy
6.0A mix of simple and complex structures is attempted, yet frequent errors in agreement, word form, and sentence construction ('can eases', 'which the harmful consequences are still unknown') reduce accuracy, though meaning remains mostly clear.
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