Nowadays,nuclear technology and for the purpose of a lot of .I strongly believe that, nuclear power include some advantages for people such as and .I am going to explain two advantages about nuclear power. Unfortunately, pollution is big problem today and .Therefore, people need a new solution for this problem.Then people find a new solution is nuclear technology which is not bad effect for environment .Well, why nuclear for environment pollution, because nuclear technology has any harmfull effect on environment.Also,nuclear technology that mean it is exactly clean life.I read Turkish daily newspaper two days ago and according to newspaper, we can see big differences between on environment with a lot of countries use nuclear technology, because nuclear technology do not offer any bad effect like a other usage. nuclear energy is cheaper technology in world and is better than past, because nuclear power .I watched Tv programs about nuclear power one year ago and it indicated nuclear power supply saving to 75% generate of electricity.This and very very big reason for use of nuclear technolgy.This reason provide big advantage for country economy and a lot of countries established new power plants . To sum up, for people and it supply main two advantages avoid environment pollution and .
Benefits and Disadvantages of Nuclear Technology
The threat of nuclear weapons maintains world peace and nuclear power provides cheap and clean energy. The benefits of nuclear technology far outweigh the disadvantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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Why this response received Band 5.0
The response has a clear position and a simple two-part structure covering the environment and economy, which is its strongest aspect. Its main limitation is weak development, with unconvincing and contradictory support, plus frequent language errors that reduce clarity throughout.
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Task Response
5.0The response presents a clear position and addresses the question through two benefits, but the ideas are only partially developed, the support is vague and internally inconsistent, and the counterargument in the prompt is never engaged.
Coherence and Cohesion
5.0There is an apparent overall structure with basic linking devices, but progression within paragraphs is mechanical and repetitive, and some statements do not connect logically.
Lexical Resource
5.0Vocabulary is limited and repetitive, with attempts at less common items undermined by spelling errors such as 'sollution' and 'technolgy' and imprecise usage like 'include saving'.
Grammatical Range and Accuracy
5.0A mix of simple and some complex forms is attempted, but frequent errors in articles, agreement, and verb forms, including meaning-distorting negatives like 'has any harmfull effect', regularly reduce accuracy.
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