As being the prominent and one of the most powerful technique, Administrative bodies of across the globe utilizes nuclear technology for its own benefits. Although, nuclear weapons are one of the most integral parts of maintaining world’s peace, however policy makers debate whether the advantages of nuclear technology surpass the disadvantages. Mainly, because of its benefits such as public protection and cheap energy sources, clears the air why advantages of using nuclear technology way outweigh the disadvantages. Nuclear technology for public protection since it has the direct correlation with the all over the world. To clarify this, many strong and powerful , Russia, India and China have nuclear weapons made from nuclear technology and a very dangerous and harmful war happens between countries . For example, in 1965, in China-India war, India utilized against China to shield its people. It can be also used for producing various energies, which . It helps to generate cheap and clean energy. For example, in the year of 1998, Russia manufactured cold water refinement energy, which helps to clean and cold water to its citizens . Although disadvantage such as explosion with the misuse of nuclear technology, however its use as public protection and useful source for energy surpassing all of its disadvantages. In future, Governments from all across the world should need to utilize more nuclear technology in a correct way to explore more benefits for human beings any misuse must be avoided.
Benefits and Disadvantages of Nuclear Technology
The threat of nuclear weapons maintains world peace and nuclear power provides cheap and clean energy. The benefits of nuclear technology far outweigh the disadvantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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Overall assessment
Why this response received Band 5.0
The response clearly states a position in favour of nuclear technology and organises it into distinct paragraphs covering safety and energy. Its main limitations are underdeveloped and factually inaccurate supporting examples alongside frequent grammatical and structural errors that weaken precision.
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Task Response
5.0The response presents a clear position that benefits outweigh disadvantages and addresses both safety and energy, but ideas are only partially developed and the supporting examples are factually implausible, limiting the task coverage.
Coherence and Cohesion
5.0There is a discernible paragraph structure with some linking devices, but progression is mechanical and cohesion is often faulty, such as the illogical 'Although... however' framing of the conclusion.
Lexical Resource
5.0Vocabulary shows some attempt at topic-related phrasing such as 'policy makers' and 'low-cost', yet it is often imprecise or awkward, as in 'utilized nuclear atom' and 'way outweigh'.
Grammatical Range and Accuracy
4.5Sentence structures are frequently error-prone, including broken comparative constructions, subject-verb issues like 'benefits... clears the air', and faulty clause combinations, which sometimes strain comprehension.
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