The given pie chart illustrates the percentage of people of different nationalities residing in Australia, whereas the table shows demographical figures which are classified according to urban and rural areas. The initial impression from the pie chart is that the vast majority of Australian people . It is also noticeable that most Australian people, regardless of their ethnicity, are city dwellers. According to the pie chart, Australian of the total population. This is followed by the figure for people coming from the UK (7%) and New Zealand (3%). People of Chinese and Dutch ethnicity, on the other hand, . As is seen from the table, roughly 80% of people from Australia and New Zealand live in cities, whereas only around 20% live in the countryside. A similar picture is evident in the figures for people from China and New Zealand, with their urban population amounting to a high of 90-99%.
Australia Population by Nationality and Area
The table and pie chart give information about the population in Australia according to different nationalities and areas.
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Overall assessment
Why this response received Band 7.0
The response presents a clear overview and organises the pie chart and table information logically, with generally accurate data selection. Its main limitation is incomplete coverage of the table, since the figures for British and Dutch residents are omitted and one comparison is slightly inaccurate.
IELTS criteria
How each score was decided
Task Achievement
6.0The response gives a clear overview and covers the pie chart accurately, but omits the British and Dutch rows from the table and slightly misreports the New Zealand city figure as about 80%, leaving key data under-covered.
Coherence and Cohesion
7.0Ideas progress logically across a clear introduction, overview, and two body paragraphs, with cohesive devices such as 'whereas' and 'on the other hand' used naturally.
Lexical Resource
7.0Vocabulary is flexible and precise, with phrases like 'city dwellers', 'negligible', and 'a similar picture is evident', showing good awareness of style and collocation.
Grammatical Range and Accuracy
7.0A wide range of complex structures, including relative clauses and participial phrases, is used with accuracy and flexibility throughout the response.