Team Sports vs Individual Sports

The response addresses all parts of the task, discusses both views with relevant main ideas, and presents a clear, consistent qualified opinion, though support stays somewhat general.

Ideas progress logically across well-structured paragraphs with effective use of cohesive devices and clear referencing throughout.

Vocabulary is sufficiently flexible and precise for the topic, using natural collocations such as interpersonal skills and sense of unity, with only occasional formulaic phrasing.

A variety of complex structures, including relative and conditional clauses, are used with good control and only rare, minor errors that do not impede understanding.

Both views are addressed and the preference for team sports is maintained. Doubles badminton is a relevant example of cooperation between teammates, supported by an explanation of coordination and trust. The broader claim that individual qualities are difficult to develop in team sports needs more qualification.

Ideas progress logically within clear paragraphs with functional linking devices, although transitions such as 'Next' and 'Moreover' are occasionally mechanical and cohesion within examples is uneven.

Vocabulary shows good range and precision in places (foster, camaraderie, self-reliant), with only occasional awkward formulations like 'the ability to foresight' that do not impede meaning.

Complex sentences generally communicate ideas clearly, but there are agreement errors in 'It allows' after plural 'individual sports' and 'team sports is'. The fragment beginning 'All of which' and the structure 'the ability to foresight' also need repair. These errors seldom prevent understanding.

Both views are explained with relevant examples, and the body paragraphs support the writer's view that each form of sport offers valuable benefits. The final preference for individual choice could be connected more explicitly to the introduction's equal-benefits judgement.

Ideas are logically organised with clear paragraphing and generally flexible cohesive devices, with only occasional mechanical linking such as 'Or another case in point'.

Vocabulary is sufficiently wide and precise, using less common items like 'maximization of personal capacities' and 'synergy', with only minor awkward collocations.

A variety of complex structures is used with generally good control, and errors such as 'a goal being score' are minor and do not impede meaning.

The response addresses both views clearly, presents a consistent personal opinion, and develops each main idea with relevant examples, though some points remain under-explored.

Ideas progress logically across clear paragraphs with a range of cohesive devices, though linking is at times mechanical and extension within paragraphs is limited.

Vocabulary is sufficiently flexible and precise, using less common items such as perseverance and rapturous applause, alongside occasional slightly awkward collocations like know more other students.

A variety of complex structures, including conditionals and inversion, are used with good control, and errors are minor and do not impede communication.

The response discusses both views, states and sustains a clear opinion, and extends main ideas with examples, though some claims are asserted rather than fully supported.

Ideas progress logically across well-organised paragraphs with a range of cohesive devices, although a few transitions are somewhat formulaic.

Vocabulary is flexible and sometimes precise, with natural idiomatic phrases, but occasional awkward or inflated collocations reduce precision.

A wide range of complex structures is used with generally good control, and errors are minor and rarely impede communication.

Both views are fully addressed with a clear position sustained throughout, and main ideas are developed with relevant though somewhat generic examples.

Progression is logical with clear paragraphing and effective linking devices, though cohesion is occasionally mechanical and the conclusion is somewhat repetitive.

Vocabulary is sufficiently flexible and precise for the topic, with good collocation such as 'mental fortitude' and 'interpersonal skills', but some phrasing is formulaic.

A wide range of structures is used with generally strong control, including complex sentences and subordinate clauses, with only minor errors that do not impede meaning.

Both views are addressed, the position is clear and sustained, and main ideas are developed with relevant reasoning, though support remains somewhat general rather than fully extended.

Ideas progress logically across well-managed paragraphs with a range of cohesive devices used naturally, with only occasional slightly mechanical linkage such as 'nonetheless' transitions.

Vocabulary is flexible and precise, with natural collocations such as 'invaluable way', 'delegate responsibilities', and 'self-motivation', though occasional phrasing like 'get some important perks' is less formal.

A wide range of structures is used accurately, including concessive clauses with 'while' and 'although', relative clauses, coordination and a correctly used semicolon. Complex sentences remain clear and controlled, with very few grammatical errors.

Both views are discussed and a clear preference for team sports is sustained. Relevant examples explain self-reliance and cooperation, although the final claims about emotional intelligence and overall growth receive less specific support.

Paragraphing is logical and cohesive devices such as 'on one hand' and 'furthermore' are used effectively, with progression that is generally seamless though somewhat formulaic.

Vocabulary is flexible and precise, using natural collocations like 'cultivate self-reliance' and 'camaraderie,' with only minor slips such as 'strengths and weakness'.

Complex sentences, relative clauses and coordinated structures show strong control. The phrase 'strengths and weakness' needs the plural noun 'weaknesses'; this is a number-form error rather than subject-verb agreement. Such slips are rare and do not impede meaning.