Pros and Cons of Mandatory Company Uniforms

The response addresses both sides of the task with a relevant example and a summarizing conclusion, but some ideas are underdeveloped or unclearly framed, such as the claim about employees not knowing the right material for uniforms.

Progression is generally clear with paragraphing by advantage and disadvantage and consistent use of cohesive devices, though linking is sometimes mechanical and repetitive.

Vocabulary is adequate for the topic with some attempt at less common items like 'sense of belonging' and 'constricting', but recurring awkward or inaccurate collocations limit precision.

A range of complex structures is used with generally clear meaning, although errors in clause construction and punctuation, along with unclear reference, occasionally reduce fluency.

The response addresses all parts of the task, presents a clear position, extends and supports both advantages and disadvantages with relevant explanation and examples, and reaches a clear conclusion.

Ideas are logically organized into clear paragraphs with a logical progression throughout, using cohesive devices and referencing effectively, though connections occasionally feel mechanical.

A sufficient range of vocabulary is used with some flexibility and awareness of style, though occasional imprecise collocations such as 'in a long period of time' limit precision.

A variety of complex structures is used with generally good control. Occasional errors include the past perfect in “had been chosen” without a past reference point and “in” rather than “for” when expressing duration.

The response addresses both advantages and disadvantages with a clear overview and extended main ideas, though some support, such as the India and Bata examples, is asserted rather than fully developed or substantiated.

Ideas are organised logically across clear paragraphs with a range of cohesive devices, although linking within some arguments is slightly mechanical and repetitive.

Vocabulary is sufficiently flexible for the topic, including expenditure, monotony and allocate. Precision is less consistent in “a good bonding” and in the movement between output and sales.

A variety of complex structures is used with generally good control, and errors such as the capitalised In and occasional awkward phrasing are minor and do not impede meaning.