Making Quick First Impressions: Good or Bad Thing?

When we meet someone for the first time, we generally decide very quickly what kind of person we think they are and if we like them or not. Is this a good thing or a bad thing?

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WhyThis is aPositive or negative essay — it asks why a trend is happening and whether it is good or bad.

SoWe split the ideas intoPositive(why it is good)andNegative(why it is bad).

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Essay · 289 words · 5 paragraphs · 12 comments

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Response 01
Estimated band7.5/ 9

Overall assessment

The response directly answers the question with a clear, consistent position and three well-developed supporting ideas. Its strongest aspect is the controlled, precise language, while the main limitation is the somewhat formulaic development, where each point is supported briefly rather than extended with depth or varied examples.

TR

Task Response

The response fully addresses the task with a clear position, relevant main ideas, and appropriate supporting examples, though development is somewhat general rather than extended.

7.5
CC

Coherence and Cohesion

Ideas progress logically across well-structured paragraphs with effective linking devices, although transitions such as furthermore and additionally are somewhat predictable.

7.5
LR

Lexical Resource

Vocabulary is wide and precise, with natural collocations like snap judgments and preconceived notions, and only minimal lapses in precision.

7.5
GRA

Grammatical Range and Accuracy

A variety of complex structures is used with good flexibility and control, and errors are rare and non-impeding.

7.5

What to work on next

Deepen the development of each main idea by extending one or two examples with more concrete detail or analysis rather than introducing three similar points.

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