Nowadays, international tourism is the biggest industry in the world. Unfortunately, international tourism creates tensions rather than understanding between people from different countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
When people discuss the impacts of international tourism, they have different opinions. Some people think that this harms the international understanding, while others believe it is helpful to increase international understanding. In my view, there are many reasons to think that this will improve international understanding in the peoples’ different cultures. First of all, it helps in spreading of culture. In the world, every country has its own distinct society and cultures. For example, an Italian person can better understand the Asians by visiting any Asian nation and come to know how young people respect their elders in their society. Good cultural values which are absent from one's own society can be adapted from other societies. Moreover, International tourism aids in learning foreign languages. Learning new language enrich one's knowledge and experience. I am an Indian student and want to get admitted to Harvard University in PhD. Course. Thus I’ll have to enrol in English language courses with my studies. This will a valuable experience and will provide me chances to learn a new language and thus the cultures and history associated with it. Finally, Tourism provides the real experience of things and History. We have seen many things in TV, internet and movies, but a visit to that place makes us closer to that thing. I have seen Zebras in discovery channel videos and would like to visit the central African forest reserve to examine and discover more about this animal. Through a person can get the practical reality and this will possible with the help of African peoples and their government. To sum up, it is clear that tourism is important to people of different cultures. The above discussion shows that it not only provides one with the opportunity to know about other cultures, languages, history but also enhance the possibility to learn and experience the first-hand experience many realities.
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Response 02
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Today the world is more connected than any time before and people from all over the countries can arrive at their destination within 24 hours. However, while this possibility permits to millions of individuals to encounter different cultures every year, the phenomenon of the international tourism brings also conflicts between people with different habits and costumes. To begin, tourism creates isolation more than integration. In fact, tourists prefer to look at different places, costumes and habits like sitting in front of the television screen, watching a documentary, more than sharing time with the indigenous population. Furthermore, tourists don't respect foreign habits and cultures, often because they don't understand it. For example, they throw the litter on the ground, or even worse they don't respect their hosts’ religion. Nevertheless, the effects of international tourism are not all negative. Sometimes tourists fall in love with people and places they visit and decide to live in there, acting as mediators between cultures and enhancing integration. It's the case of lots of tourist guides that decided to move abroad and enjoy a different lifestyle and culture, trying to share their feelings with visitors. Also speaking the language of the place we visit can help us understand people from different cultures. In addition, a large amount of money around the tourism business contrasts the tendency of some countries to close their border to foreign people. This can lead to a better comprehension of these cultures and so to integration. In conclusion, the biggest industry in the world have to feel the need of changes in the way tourism is structured, so it could become a mean of integration and reciprocal understanding more than create tensions between cultures.
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Response 03
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Nowadays international tourism is the biggest industry in the world. Unfortunately, international tourism creates tension rather than understanding between people from different cultures. This evident situation has become the result of great migration among people all over the world. Since the second half of the 20th-century people from different countries began to explore the distant countries and various places around the world and it is getting more and more popular to travel a lot and discover unknown lands these days. International tourism has its advantages as well as disadvantages. If to speak about advantages they are quite obvious- people have a lot of amazing opportunities to know the world inside out, to see and feel the bright colours of wild nature, traditions and customs of different cultures belonging to Asia, Europe, Australia and Africa. International tourists invest the development of the economic and financial sphere of the countries they visit. Also, they help to support local people from unemployment - especially in small and poor countries, giving them the chance to survive. People are getting closer and friendlier to each other despite all differences they have. On the other hand, people got tired of endless tourist streams flowing into their country every year. They want to have a rest and live their ordinary life as they used to live before a foreign invasion. Some countries are very close and private, their culture and traditions are very strict and strange for the most of the tourists. The manner of behaviour, dress and many others which were brought and shown by foreigners irritates, makes local people angry and unfriendly and not ready to accept and communicate well. For instance, white tourists in some parts of Africa are really in serious danger in the streets and poor districts of many towns and cities because of the white dominance and oppression in the past. Rich tourists in developing countries are the source of displeasure, aggression, misunderstanding and tension from native people. To sum up I would like to say that the future of international tourism completely depends on people themselves and their correct and acceptable behaviour in overseas countries. It won't cause much tension and misunderstanding but trust, respect and friendly attitude to each other. Nevertheless, when different cultures meet, they always have a lot of things to compare, accept, value or argue about.
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Response 04
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In recent times, the role of the tourism industry in the world economy cannot be neglected. The tourism industry has emerged as one of the biggest industry in the world, providing jobs to millions. Often it is said, that world is becoming smaller, and I believe it is because of this frequent international travel. I do not agree that international tourism creates tension; in fact, it brings different culture together. When a person travels from one country to another, they learn about each other’s culture, cuisine and habits. People become more tolerant towards each other’s differences. International tourism helps people in experiencing the natural beauty which could not be found in their country. I believe, due to increased international travel, people have subdued. For instance, countries like Maldives, Thailand, India (Goa) etc. thrives on tourism and we can clearly notice the difference between the people’s attitude towards each other in these places as compared to others. People are friendlier, understanding and accommodating. They are ready to change themselves easily to cater to new demands of tourist. Another good example would be Dubai, which is part of UAE but is very different than any other emirates. It is because of international tourism that Dubai is more tolerant and modern and developed. The biggest pros of international tourism are, we can learn a lot from different countries. For instance, if you go to Singapore, you cannot help but notice how effective their public transport systems are; and how stringently all the rules are followed. Similarly, many tourists come to India to seek spiritual guidance and to learn yoga, which they might not get in their country. In a nutshell, I think, international travel alleviates tension between the two nations rather than creating. In today’s economy, when every country is interdependent for trade and business, international travel helps people from different countries to understand each other and exist in harmony.
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Response 05
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In today’s world, international tourism is generating enormous financial wealth and has become the primary source of income for numerous countries around the globe. Although many people think this industry is likely to cause tension, my conviction is that international tourism greatly facilitates understanding between people of different cultural background.
There are indeed several instances of international travel creating social conflicts. One recent incident happened when Logan Paul, a renowned Youtuber, visited Japan and made fun of Japanese traditions and lifestyles. Such mockery caused tremendous public outrage and prejudice against this young American. Another example is Chinese tourists’ inappropriate and selfish behavior during a buffet party in a Thai tourist destination a few years ago. Even though these examples did not speak for the rest of American and Chinese populations, they, as a matter of fact, increased tension between the countries involved.
That being said, in most cases, visiting a foreign country can help tourists understand more about local customs and lifestyles. While the modern media, such as TV or newspapers, give people some foreign culture exposure, overseas tourists tend to have more authentic and unique experiences that lead to more profound understanding. This is extremely important because embracing cultural differences is key to establishing and maintaining social relationships in this day and age.
In conclusion, international tourism allows overseas visitors to experience different cultures and therefore connects everyone through mutual understanding. In my opinion, we should not merely judge the industry based on a number of situations where conflicts arise from misconduct of only a group of individuals.
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Response 06
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Many people argue that as one of the world’s major industries, international tourism has facilitated cross-cultural understanding. However, some claim that this sector has paved the way for tensions to arise. From my point of view, I side with the view that international tourism helps promote peace rather than dispute between nations.
To start with, international travel allows interracial understanding and friendship between nations to flourish. By experiencing life in other parts of the world and taking a closer look into the locals’ mindset through their cuisines and traditions, foreigners can respect and sympathize with the natives more. Furthermore, most hate starts from fear of the unknown. When people do not understand another race, they start to believe in false preconceptions, thus shunning people who do not share the same root with them. Through international tourism, this bias can be erased since people are given a glimpse into other cultures and it can help correct existing prejudices.
On the other hand, it is unfortunate that international travel, if done with ignorance, can create disputes between people from different countries. Every country the world over has their own customs and superstitions, therefore it is important to learn what the locals believe in. If a traveler does not conduct any research then it is very likely that the traveler can unintentionally offend the local values, thus causing conflicts to arise. Take the “OK” sign as an example, it is one of the most common gestures throughout the world, yet its meaning varies between nations. While in America, the “OK” sign equals something positive and good, in Iran, it is an insult.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that international tourism can foster cross-cultural understanding rather than tensions due to its contribution in removing false preconceptions. Nevertheless, careless travelers may bring about disputes if they are not proactive in learning the culture of their destination.
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Response 07
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In the last two decades, the tourism sector has seen sharp progression. Currently, it is considered as one of the biggest industries in the world, but, unluckily, it creates tension instead of coordination among the people from various cultures. I completely disagree with this opinion and believe that it brings harmony, fraternity and love across nations.
First of all, foreign tourists visit any other country to explore its culture or the scenic beauty. As a result, before the trip, they research about the tradition and lifestyle of the nation, so that they can enjoy it to the most. By learning about the other culture, they show their respect to the people of the tourist area. In addition, tourists also generate employment opportunities, hence people respect them and try to make their experience pleasurable. People from hotel or transportation industry benefit from tourists and make arrangements according to their requirements, so ultimately this creates understanding and love between them.
Moreover, the tourist industry is an extremely important part of an economy. Foreign visitors are a source of revenue generation which helps in boosting the economy of the country. Therefore, the government also provides all the facilities to the tourists and tries to minimize the circumstances where any conflict can arise due to different culture, for example, in all the famous tourist destinations, special guides are provided to the international visitors so that they will not face any problem due to the different traditions, particularly, language.
To conclude, international tourism is the largest sector in the world and it brings people from different traditions together and also assists in the globalization of the cultures. Additionally, it is a great way to understand and learn about new cultures and popularize your traditions across the globe.
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Response 08
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As air transport facilitates vital connectivity around the world, international tourism has
become the most lucrative market. However, there are many debates that the industry polarizes people of different cultures. I disagree with this notion because international tourism, in my opinion, substantially promotes cultural exchange.
To begin with, some people argue that tourism is one of the main reasons causing friction between locals and visitors. The burgeoning industry develops radically, from which a period of chaos and infringements ensue. Rome, for example, is renowned for its scenic wonders but its infamous petty crimes such as pickpocketing or robbery have become an emerging concern among travelers. Not only Venice but most tourist attractions also are forced into a similar impasse since the police personnel is not enough to control crime rates due to the enormous number of tourists. In the long run, it may leave a bad impression on the natives to the visitors.
On the other hand, I believe that international tourism is a remarkable way to develop understanding between cultures. The fundamentals of culture are usually expressed through traditional food and music that have to be experienced first-hand in the original country or region. To give an example, the foreign traveler can perceive a special charm in Vietnamese culture by listening to the imperial music in Hue, a masterpiece of intangible heritage by UNESCO, which beautifully recreate the feudal era of Vietnam . Furthermore, many overseas visitors want to visit the city for the extraordinary, balanced taste of spicy, salty, and umami in “Bun bo Hue” which comes from the authentic Hue’s fermented shrimp paste. In other words, the flavorful taste of Bun bo Hue with delightful live imperial court music is an unrivaled experience of culture that people cannot live vicariously by reading books or watching Youtube.
In conclusion, international tourism has a major contribution to fostering meaningful cultural exchange despite several security drawbacks. In my opinion, the authorities of tourist attractions can develop their security by engaging artificial intelligence in public cameras in which they can detect and prevent crimes.
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Response 09
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International tourism is now considered the largest industry in the world. However, many think that it does not foster mutual understanding between people of different nations, but causes tensions to arise. Although problems associated with international tourism are inevitable , I would argue that this industry plays an important role in promoting peace among countries.
On the one hand, I agree that international tourism, in some cases, could lead to anger between people of different cultural backgrounds. The truth is, every country possesses its own indigenous culture, beliefs, mind-sets and norms that foreign tourists are not aware of. Ignorance and carelessness sometimes causes tourists to behave in ways which fail to respect local customs or religious values . For example, kissing someone on the cheek is a common greeting etiquette in many European countries, while in many Asian cultures it may only be considered appropriate among family members or lovers and thus, such gesture can be considered an offence or sexual harassment . This is just one example where international tourists may create irritation in cross-cultural interaction .
On the other hand, I believe that tourism, if conducted with respect for the traditions, practices and customs of the host country, will be a great movement that contributes to international goodwill and enriches friendship between nations. In fact, overseas travel gives tourists around the world a glimpse into other cultures by allowing them to experience different ways of life, discovering new cuisine or visiting cultural heritages. That helps tourists to learn, understand and respect another culture’s values, thus bridge the cultural gap. When tourism brings together people of different cultures and regions, it can foster peace and friendship among them.
In conclusion, despite some problems, I am of the opinion that international tourism can enhance local cultural awareness and hence helps in building better understanding and peaceful relations between people of different nations.
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Response 10
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In today’s world, international tourism is generating enormous financial wealth and has become the primary source of income for numerous countries around the globe. Although many people think this industry is likely to cause tension, my conviction is that international tourism greatly facilitates understanding between people of different cultural backgrounds.
There are indeed several instances where international travel created social conflicts. One recent incident occurred when Logan Paul, a renowned Youtuber, visited Japan and ridiculed Japanese traditions and lifestyles. Such mockery caused tremendous public outrage and prejudice against this young American. Another example is the inappropriate and selfish behavior of a group of Chinese tourists during a buffet dinner party in a Thai tourist destination a few years ago. Even though these examples do not represent the attitudes and behavior of the rest of the American and Chinese populations, they, as a matter of fact, did increase tension between the countries involved.
That being said, visiting a foreign country will most likely help tourists to understand more about the local customs and lifestyles. While mass media , such as TV or newspapers, gives people some exposure to foreign cultures, overseas tourists tend to have more authentic and unique experiences that lead to a more profound understanding. This is extremely important because embracing cultural differences is key to establishing and maintaining social relationships in this day and age.
In conclusion, international tourism allows overseas visitors to experience different cultures and can therefore connect people through a mutual understanding. In my opinion, we should not merely judge the industry based on a small number of situations where conflicts arose from the misconduct of only a handful of individuals.
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Response 11
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The growth of tourism and the numbers of people travelling to other countries for their vacations has led to debate as to whether this is beneficial. I believe that there are many problems which arise out of the tourist industry, and will examine these in detail.
Many people argue that travel broadens the mind. However, this statement does not fully hold water. I would argue that spending a few weeks in another country is not long enough to gain a proper understanding of an alien culture. A foreigner visiting Britain might be met with the traditional British reserve, and mistakenly conclude that the British are unfriendly. Furthermore, some people are unwilling to open their minds. A Western traveller to an Arab country is unlikely to consider that the veiling of women is acceptable.
Being a tourist in a foreign country brings with it problems that can lead to dislike of the native people. Firstly, a foreigner is vulnerable, and is often ripped off by locals. Secondly, the language barrier can lead to misunderstandings. Thirdly, tourists are often hassled to buy goods, which can ruin a holiday. When I went to Bali, people tried to sell me something every five minutes, and this totally spoilt my sunbathing.
Local people also often end up disliking foreigners. Visitors may mistakenly act contrary to local norms, or they may just be plain offensive, as many drunken British holidaymakers must seem to the Spanish. Global tourism can lead to hostility from the native people, who may feel their traditional way of life is under threat. Additionally, the relative wealth of the foreign visitors can cause envy and resentment.
In conclusion, I would say that I largely agree with the argument that global tourism creates misunderstanding between people from different cultures, and that the differences are often a cause for conflict rather than celebration.
Make people feel uneasy or angry with one another.
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Although many people think this industry is likely to cause tension, my conviction is that international tourism greatly facilitates understanding between people of different cultural backgrounds.