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Influence of Teachers Versus Parents on Child Development

Once children start school, teachers have more influence on their intellectual and social development than parents.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Essay ideas: Influence of Teachers Versus Parents on Child Development

WhyThis is anOpinion essay — it asks whether you agree or disagree with a statement.

SoWe split the ideas intoReasons to agree(supports the statement)andReasons to disagree(argues against it).

Reasons to agree

2 ideas

Reasons to disagree

3 ideas

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Essay · 261 words · 4 paragraphs · 21 comments

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Response 01
Estimated band6.0/ 9

Overall assessment

The essay covers both intellectual and social development and ends with a relevant conclusion that distinguishes teachers’ and parents’ roles. However, it does not state the extent of agreement clearly at the outset, and the examples do not fully establish why either group has greater influence. Recurring grammar and word-choice errors sometimes strain clarity, although the main argument remains understandable.

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Task Response

The response addresses both aspects of development and reaches a qualified conclusion, but the extent-of-agreement position is never clearly stated upfront and ideas are unevenly developed.

6.0
CC

Coherence and Cohesion

The sequence from teachers’ intellectual influence to parents’ social influence is broadly clear and each stage has its own paragraph, but referencing is sometimes loose, as when 'They have been taught' follows a sentence about learning, and some linking is mechanical.

6.0
LR

Lexical Resource

Vocabulary range is adequate with some topic-appropriate phrases, though awkward collocations like 'plan a pivotal role' and imprecise word choices appear regularly.

6.0
GRA

Grammatical Range and Accuracy

A mix of structures is attempted, but frequent errors in articles, tense, and clause construction recur while meaning stays recoverable.

6.0

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State your position explicitly in the introduction, indicating the extent to which you agree or disagree, and support it consistently throughout the essay.

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