The response addresses both sides and maintains a clear position that the advantages outweigh the disadvantages. Relevant examples support its argument, although the relative weight of the benefits and costs needs fuller explanation, and some causal claims are overstated.
8.0Ideas progress logically across clearly organised paragraphs, with effective linking devices and cohesive referencing that make the argument easy to follow throughout.
8.0Vocabulary is wide and precise, featuring natural academic collocations such as carbon intensity, erosion of local agricultural economies, and dietary diversity, with only minimal inaccuracy.
8.0GRAGrammatical Range and Accuracy
A wide range of complex structures, including concessive and relative clauses and participial constructions, is generally handled accurately. The unclear reference and plural verb in "which overshadow" are a noticeable local lapse.
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