Both views are addressed with a clear opinion and relevant cultural and budget arguments. The Greece example needs a clearer connection to arts spending, and the conditions attached to the final opinion need development.
8.0Ideas progress logically across well-organised paragraphs with effective referencing, though some linking is formulaic and a few sentences connect ideas somewhat mechanically.
7.0Vocabulary is sufficiently flexible and precise, with good collocations such as budget deficits, cultural heritage, and poverty alleviation, alongside occasional slightly generic phrasing.
7.0GRAGrammatical Range and Accuracy
A wide range of sentence structures is used with strong accuracy, including complex forms like relative clauses and concessive constructions, with only minor imperfections.
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