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Government Funding for Artists

Some believe that the government should support artists like musicians, painters, and poets, while others argue that this is a misuse of funds. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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WhyThis is aDiscussion essay — it asks you to discuss two opposing views and give your own.

SoWe split the ideas intoFirst view(supports the first view)andSecond view(supports the second view).

First view

2 ideas

Second view

2 ideas

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Response 01

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Essay · 346 words · 4 paragraphs · 11 comments

Score details

Response 01
Estimated band7.5/ 9

Overall assessment

The response addresses both views and maintains a clear position in favour of government support. Its paragraphs progress logically, and the language is fluent and largely accurate. The main opportunities are to connect the Greece and lottery examples more directly to the funding question, explain how public funding produces the claimed benefits, and develop the conditions attached to the final opinion.

TR

Task Response

Both views are addressed with a clear opinion and relevant cultural and budget arguments. The Greece example needs a clearer connection to arts spending, and the conditions attached to the final opinion need development.

8.0
CC

Coherence and Cohesion

Ideas progress logically across well-organised paragraphs with effective referencing, though some linking is formulaic and a few sentences connect ideas somewhat mechanically.

7.0
LR

Lexical Resource

Vocabulary is sufficiently flexible and precise, with good collocations such as budget deficits, cultural heritage, and poverty alleviation, alongside occasional slightly generic phrasing.

7.0
GRA

Grammatical Range and Accuracy

A wide range of sentence structures is used with strong accuracy, including complex forms like relative clauses and concessive constructions, with only minor imperfections.

7.0

What to work on next

Explain the budget trade-off and how public funding produces cultural or tourism benefits. Clarify the lottery example’s relevance and develop a concrete funding condition before restating it in the conclusion.

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