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Famous People as Role Models for Youth

In many parts of the world, famous people are regarded as role models and they have an increasing influence on the young.

Is this a positive or negative development?

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WhyThis is aPositive or negative essay — it asks why a trend is happening and whether it is good or bad.

SoWe split the ideas intoPositive(why it is good)andNegative(why it is bad).

Positive

2 ideas

Negative

5 ideas

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Response 01

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Essay · 286 words · 4 paragraphs · 11 comments

Score details

Response 01
Estimated band7.5/ 9

Overall assessment

The response presents a clear and consistent position with well-organized paragraphs, relevant explanations, and a strong conclusion. Its main limitation is that some ideas, particularly in the first body paragraph, are asserted rather than fully developed, and a few collocations sound slightly forced despite generally precise vocabulary and grammar.

TR

Task Response

The essay directly answers the question with a clear, consistent position, covers both acknowledged benefits and argued drawbacks, and reaches a firm conclusion, though some supporting points remain somewhat general.

7.0
CC

Coherence and Cohesion

Paragraphing is logical and progression is clear with effective linking devices such as 'nevertheless' and 'more problematically', with cohesion occasionally feeling slightly mechanical.

7.0
LR

Lexical Resource

Vocabulary shows good range and precision, including 'impressionable', 'discerning', and 'unattainable', though expressions such as 'poses more drawbacks than benefits' and 'over-idolization of their influence' show occasional awkwardness in word combinations.

7.0
GRA

Grammatical Range and Accuracy

Grammar demonstrates a wide range of complex structures with strong control and only rare, minor errors that do not impede meaning.

8.0

What to work on next

Develop the supporting ideas more fully with concrete examples or consequences, particularly for the claim about undervalued professions, to strengthen argument depth.

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