The response addresses the task directly with a clear position that the trend is positive, develops main ideas on convenience and living standards, and concedes and rebuts the opposing environmental argument with relevant explanation.
7.0Ideas are organised logically across clear paragraphs with effective linking devices and a consistent, well-managed progression, though some transitions remain somewhat mechanical.
7.0The response uses a sufficient range of topic-related vocabulary such as 'environmental degradation', 'resource consumption' and 'domestic convenience' with generally good control, alongside some noticeable repetition of common phrases.
7.0GRAGrammatical Range and Accuracy
The response demonstrates flexible use of complex structures, including concessive clauses, relative clauses and participle constructions, with consistently accurate sentence formation. Its grammatical control supports clear communication throughout.
8.0